Reviews for My So Called Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry about your grandma must be tough because my grandma is my favorite person in the world so i be pretty sad and wouldn't fell like writing if she had a stroke. So i offer my condlences and i didn't really notice a lot of mistakes you made so maybe you don't need a beta that bad but you still can get one. But the mistakes you make aren't big their little ones that human's make. Anyway i guess i can pray for grandma to get better. And HELL YES TO COINTUINEING YOUR STORY. that was a dumb question you asked claro qur si you should continue. And in case you don't no any spanish claro que si means of course! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue the story! I love it so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! And don't listen to anyonme who is trying to dis your story! They are all shit heads! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() I'll keep this review short. I like the story. Please keep updating. Hmm... maybe some of the people telling you to get a beta are actually offering to be a beta because that kind of suggestion definitely helps more than telling someone to get a beta. Also, remember some are really just trying to offer positive suggestions because some writers prefer suggestions more than commendations. These are just some thoughts on the subject. However, I think that you are doing great, especially for your first fanfic. Thanks, tata |
![]() ![]() ![]() no! hope sasuke isn't badly injured. update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is good please keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() thats sad well i cant wait 4 more! *~ashley~* |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...OMG SASUKE! write more! you can not end it there! meanie... lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1get naruto to save him! GET NARUTO TO SAVE HIM! other wise i will be annoyed...(o.O) sorry...i dont want sasuke to leave naruto or naruto to leave sasuke...T-T |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was really getting good. I hope Naturo gets to the brigde in time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :O sasuke no! :( update soon :D great chapter xoxox |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() its pretty nice... i like your story... but man, your grammar and spelling, its just too horrible... if there's a grade lower than 60, that would be it... but if you want, i can be your beta... i'm not a guy who is a master in english or so, but somehow, my english is very decent... after all, i've been studying english since i was in preschool... just tell me if you want me to be your beta... i'd gladly accept your offer..:D update soon!:D i'd keep an eye on this story... its really interesting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() No Sasuke stupid jock bastard trying to kill him im glad im not a jerky jock and not a gay one either just a cool jock no sasuke dont die |