Reviews for The First Time
WingedAvenger chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I loved this! I love this little way of explaining just how Sasuke became so cold and unfeeling. There were a few mistakes in the writing here and there but hey, we all have those! Very good angst and sexy rape. Fantastic job! This makes it to my favorites.
TwistedEnvisage chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Amazing! I love this story!
kitsunecoyote chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
That is angsty D

But it's pretty sexy ;)



Very well written.
VK Princess chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
This was... interesting... _''

I'd feel like a freak if I said that I LIKED it...

but you're a very good author.

And, yeah...

It actually does make a lot of sense.

Kudos to you! D
garraofdafunk chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
that was...asome and it did make a lot of sense
MYsasuke-kun chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
aw poor sasuke-kun. that was so sad. but it really made sense. poor lil guy. but surprisingly i really like. it. its a great idea. poor sasuke-kun...
vividlyvibrant chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
WO-HOW! that was really good but i got really sadd when sasuke started crying u_u but it was good by-and-by!

:D Keep upp the good workk!
Yuki no Namida chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Poor Sasuke, but you're right, this could totally be a reason for his emotionless eyes. Very well written.
SpacePirateGirl chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Nice job! You're really good at rape fics for not liking them :P LOL. you're better than some of the people who DO like rape fics! Nice job!
Tessa Marlene chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
Nice. That was a good way to explain why Sasuke was so cold and unfeeling when he first met his friends. A very angsty enjoyable read.
Fullmetal komusume chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
OMFG! You just made my day!
Matrilineal chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
XD Orochimaru is my favorite character, and Sasuke's awesome, too. This is a really cool fic. I love fanfictions that torture Sasuke. D I don't know why. It's not because I hate him, it's just cool to think about him getting hurt, or crying, or whatever. XD So yeah. :3
LunalitSol chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Angelas chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Beautiful beyond words...

I'm breathless, my throat is constricted. T-T

The most dreadful and gorgeous piece I have ever read between Orochimaru and Sasuke.

What more can I say? I praise your genious.

Marvelous job.

crazyyaoiluver chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
poor sasuke getting raped by oro :( great story btw
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