|Reviews for The Return of the real Serena|
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/7/2013
Love your story but it should be longer!
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/31/2010
Update please! haha
| Chichiforever chapter 16 . 2/18/2009
update update please really great!
| phoenyxphyre chapter 15 . 1/28/2009
hi, great story so far. can't wait to read more!
i noticed a mispell of darien's name in the 7th paragraph (where amara is confronting him). also same section, what she says doesn't make sense, i think it may be missing a word or two, she says "don't you dare to me..."
enjoy the story )
will have to check out your others later
| Sailor Rain chapter 16 . 1/2/2009
I love it so far. I wonder what will happen with her and her uncle he seems to be a very bad guy and not to be trusted at all. Please write more I can't wait to read more on what you write.
| Anniegrl911 chapter 16 . 1/1/2009
i really can't wait for the next chapter. but does darien really have to be so cold?
| rena4u chapter 16 . 1/1/2009
i luv the story plz continue! i want to noe wat happenes nxt!
| DavisJes chapter 16 . 12/31/2008
Thanks for continuing.
| Serenity of the Lake chapter 16 . 12/30/2008
Please update soon. I want to find out what happens next.
| thunderbird chapter 16 . 12/30/2008
That was a great chapter. I look forward to reading the ext chapter when you update again.
| Jingy5 chapter 16 . 12/30/2008
o is he the new bad guy? *sigh* family huh... this was a good update, though i was looking forward to seein more inner and outer scouts and of course those lovely generals lol but yes yes this twist is good.. i'm surprised only Ami and maybe Mina seem to partially understand why Serena had to leave and lol i find it funny that Rei and Darien keep reminding her that she left them alone when they practically told her to 'get lost' on a daily basis *sigh* good update..
| snoopykid chapter 16 . 12/30/2008
damn I want more!Please hurry with the next chapter
| SkylerKnight chapter 16 . 12/30/2008
Awesome update! another cliffy ah im gonna go insane! great writing by the way. :)
| Ladyroo88 chapter 16 . 12/30/2008
WOW! just wow! I love it! so is the uncle good or bad? I can't wait to see!
| Aleric chapter 16 . 12/30/2008
Whoo boy. Darien must brush his teeth with shoe polish. No matter what the situation, he just can't keep from sticking his foot in his mouth. Clearly Serena could see that this was the bad guy. She didn't need him to tell her that. But then what can you expect? The man clearly has an issue with responsibility and accountability. Every problem is always someone else's fault. Even here when he should have concentrated solely on her safety, he chooses to berate her for not being there, using her power to help them. Even though it was their treatment of her that lead to her departure. Regardless of whether they knew her true identity or not, their treatment of their friend was unconscionable. Yet they want her around to use her power to help them. (Sorry, small rant. I digress)
Serenity obviously knew Alexandrite was the bad guy. And she never would have gone with him if not for Darien's stupidity. I can't wait to see the Outers' and the Generals' reactions when they find out what happened. No doubt Darien and the Inner's will try to put the blame on Serena. But they will miss an important detail. (two actually) Neptune and Pluto can use the Mirror, and the TimeGate to see what actually happened. Which will inevitably give Amara and the Generals even more reason to be angry. Not only will Darien's actions put Serenity in danger, but he will blame her for it.