Reviews for End
ReaderCreature chapter 1 . 1/12
Fantastic story. Though it was short you managed to capture the feel from the game so perfectly. Kudos to you!
crazysmile15 chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
NO, NOT PYRAMID HEAD! I LOVED HIM! lol!
montycrowley chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
I caught this on your profile page but before approaching it, I decided to educate myself more on Pyramid Head and Maria (all I knew was what Pyramid Head was).

Never played the game before, but I know of it and I have to say, wonderful job, as usual, on the writing. And I detected some PH and Maria there! VERY unusual, but oh, you are quite skilled to have done it. :]
J Val3ntine chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Wow. This is just breath taking.

You did a wonderful job at setting a mood and concluding poor Maria's fate.

I hope you plan on writing more in the future!
Sailor Pandabear chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
nice
Sunny chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Aww... That was so sad. I loved it. :)

Especially the bit where Maria has a 'conversation' with Pyramid Head.
Pb2Ag chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Did I just detect a hint of PH/Maria? Wtf? Wow. That takes skill to pull off.

I've yet to beat the game, but I must say, I really liked this piece. Spectacular wording, aswell. Over all, lovely job.
Cat Alex chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Ooh, good stuff! Chilling, but with a nice sense of closure. But you also have that touch of humour you always carry that I love. A interesting portrayal of the end of SH2 and tying in the whole Maria/PH thing. Keep up the awesomeness!
Aelibia chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Aw.

I don't even have any idea what Silent Hill IS, and I still think it's sad!