Reviews for The angel who lost her wings
Angel-Dust-Ryuuki chapter 54 . 2/22/2011
I want to slap itachi! At least in this story in the real one he is not so bad. I wonder if she will ever tell sasuke what happened to her
Angel-Dust-Ryuuki chapter 3 . 2/21/2011
Can I bash Sakura's scull open? PLLLLLEEASSSE!

I found it quite surprising that Sasuke actually cried at this age.
Angel-Dust-Ryuuki chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Um...isn't it suppose to be leaf village head band not Grass...
TheLittleCreationist chapter 29 . 10/27/2009
Really enjoying your story!
xXxAiriinxXx chapter 54 . 5/12/2009
... O.M.G! O.O

im totally moved by this story! ANd,and ,and.. Itachi! He... 'touched' her! aah~

im speechless... I cant really Put the thing im feeling into words its just like 'wahh! o.m.g. ahh!' Something like that..

But it is really good, And when i say really.. I do mean REALLY! :D good work!
xXxAiriinxXx chapter 33 . 5/12/2009
awe~ so cute from sasuke!

i love you! (and the story... No duh! :D )
dark anglez chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
ok then...
IceCrome chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
Oh Jesus...

Seriously, I've only read the first chapter, but I can already tell this is a Mary-Sue story. But I hope to God I'm wrong.

Look, according to your summary, she was 'part of Sasuke's past' which is a DEFINITE Mary-Sue point.


In a few bright spots, though, you have good spelling. But put quotations instead of apostrophes.

And don't say 'if you don't like, don't review' because I will review and I won't be sunshine lollipops and rainbows.

Good day.
freak a geek chapter 33 . 9/12/2007
I'm sorry. It's a little too late to read the rest, but I will finish! Anyways, great story! Can't wait to read the rest!

Love Micah
Lonely Kitty chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
ello there myu-chan, id review for the girl with the streak but it didnt let me. boo. i just reread this story again because i rushed through it the first time. YOU BETTER MAKE A SEQUAL! i know you want to. anyway thanx i think im mental to! dats why im da kitty! (nods head approvingly then hugs Lack plushi) dont ask how i got it, its make a mika/sasuke sequal! they are to cute together! i want to see mika boss sasuke around! if you do...ill give you a cookie! (looks in cookie jar) oh...snaps...uh...ill give you my invisible lack plushi instead, i dont have anymore cookies. oh well keep it up nya!

~Lonely Kitty~
Nostalgic Beauty chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
Hmm, I think you rushed the story a bit there. You have a good idea for a story line, but you need to slow it down a bit and develop the characters more.
AceeDude chapter 53 . 8/21/2007
that is sho shad! i'm a shad panda. Dude, you gotta be a pretty good writer. I cried god dammit!

well done. don't die or my racoon servants shall come and eat your rotting corpse. :( the racoons are watching! *points to own eyes then points to you*
Soankast chapter 53 . 8/21/2007
Thank you very, very much. It has been fantastic to read your fanfic. You've done a great job and it's almost sad that it is completed. I liked it very much.
Lonely Kitty chapter 53 . 8/20/2007
wha? the end? no fair! i just read it!...your next one better be good... i know it will... yay! keep it up nya~LOYAL LAST MINUITE FOLLOWER LONELY KITTY
Lonely Kitty chapter 43 . 8/20/2007
YOUR STORIES HAVE GOTTEN SO SHORT. boohoo I still Love your stories though keep it up nya
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