Reviews for Nemesis
Simone Santos chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
I just wanted to say that I found this to be beautifully written. You used your words to paint a very clear picture so that I could see everything unfolding in my mind.

Great job.
Vita Venio chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
This was beautiful, well written stuff. The way you made the words work for you was nicely done, nothing too rushed or forced and it really felt like you were there experiencing the aftermath through new eyes. Nicely done on Leoben too, he can be quite the puzzle. I'd love to see more of her or you writing BSG. Do please think about continuing her story.
reflexorozy chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
This was pretty good. The dialog didn't seem forced, and the actions of the characters seemed natural.

You captured Leoben well. Have you written more on Jean? Either way, I'll be checking on your other stories.