Reviews for The Heirs of Hogwarts
Sarah Riddle Potter chapter 2 . 2/15/2004
This story is one of the best I have ever read. Please update soon
SalanTrong chapter 2 . 1/4/2003
ValentineLaine chapter 2 . 12/30/2002
Why haven't u wrote?Im waiting for you to update!
Rogndaldr chapter 2 . 8/17/2002
I think you might have a good idea here, but you REALLY need to work on spelling and grammar. Also, it'd be great if you had a little more description. And really think through this all. Do you ACTUALLY think that if Voldemort knew where Harry was all this time, Harry'd still be alive? And even if Voldemort DID know where Harry was, honestly, would he just beat him and leave him there? That's not how Voldemort works. If you want a beta-reader, my e-mail is . Contact me sometime.
Sweet Star1 chapter 2 . 7/24/2002
Interesting story
LilyAyl chapter 2 . 12/26/2001
Chapter 5 is up for Music of the Night
Lady Knight of Kennan chapter 2 . 12/12/2001
ummmm... i thought that your story was kind of out of character for harry, as well as everyone else. im not trying to flame or anything, its just, i dont think thay would really act like that. you should also try to make the fight scenes longer, and have more dialogue. just saying that they threw a few curses at him isnt really discriptive... sorry for the harshness, im just trying to give, ummm... whats the word?... Constructive Critisim! thats it. anyway, hope that it helps!
Queen Of Cliffhangers chapter 2 . 11/24/2001
Hi! Thanks for reviewing my story! (is that spelled right?) where Harry's aunt, uncle, and cousin killed? All...oh...never mind...silly me! it's midnight and my brain's not working quite right right now...anyway, put up more soon!
Wolf of Solitude chapter 2 . 11/23/2001
Oh no, Harry in an orphanage? This can't be good. Will Dumbledore ever find him? Well, probably, but what will happen until then? Oh, I'm rambling. But I can't help it. This is so good, and you left it with a giant cliffhanger. The writing is so great, too, it makes it hard to think coherently. In fact, all I can think is "more...soon...". Good luck!
sparkiE1 chapter 2 . 11/21/2001
Whoa- bit of a shocker at the end, eh? Very original. Please update soon!
sparkiE1 chapter 1 . 11/21/2001
First off- thanks for the nice review, it seriously saved my day _ (I'll be getting chapter 13 up shortly, my computer just uploaded the unedited chapter...) This is very good so far! You get Voldemort in character nicely. (Unlike me... Heh -_-;;) The big spaces don't bother me, actually... Go big spaces! Teehee. Interesting start. I'm going to the next!
Not The Original chapter 1 . 11/3/2001
Hey Lishel. i liked Chapt. 1. on my way to Chapt. 2. and since you wanted me to continue, i decided to. Chapt. 19-20 is up. hope to get your review!
jona chapter 2 . 9/10/2001
Hi Lishel!

Thanks for ploughing through and reviewing my extremely long story! In return I've read this and I think you have a promising story here! As for patience.. Uh, I don't have any really! My muse just nags at me forever, I can't get Harry Potter out of my head till I write something! Anywasy, my one piece of advice would be... go with your instincts. Your story should be whatever you think it should be, manipulate it how you want to. Don't let your reviewers boss you around too much. Write what you want, how you want, when you want. But most of all... Make sure you are enjoying what you write. Coz if you are then chances are other people will love to read it too! Personally I like to decieve and surprise my readers... But maybe that's just coz I'm evil! I dunno. The last thing I would say is... Although you may want to include things that other people have decided to use try to be original... At least in description! Uh, that's about it when it comes to my knowledge! Hope it helps! Good luck! Luv Jona xxx

Rome chapter 2 . 8/24/2001
Luved it, simply luved it. Keep on writing more.
Accidental Human Contact chapter 2 . 8/11/2001
Hey, nice story man! Write more, PLEASE...
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