|Reviews for New Business|
| CarrieVS chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
Characterisation, content, writing, all very good. Not a criticism to make; not even a nit to pick.
| Pops chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
| GrayRobes chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
You know, I could see this really happening as something in the book. I love the fact that Rosie somes on so strong to Vetinari. It seems so wrong, and yet so...right in a creepy way. He doesn't seem like a pete, though. peter was only slightly better. :D That makes it a nice innuendo, too.
| Badge177 chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
I'm intrigued, and would definitely like to read more...
I don't visit fanfiction dot net as often as I used to, so apologies for not reading and reviewing this sooner. You're one of only a handful of decent writers left in this section now. And I mean that.
| Vetinari's Eyes chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Oh, WOW. How do you do this? Are you sure you really aren't PTerry in disguise?
| Estelle Tiniwiel chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Very interesting - looking forward to seeing how this turns out!
| Magicflute chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Oh yes! I'm very very interested in how this is going. Just a wee bit disappointed that "Peter" isn't going to get any... if that's the way it's heading lol
| Big Cat chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Nice turn! YES! I just love twisted plots! Do some more. Good onya!