|Reviews for If this is Fate|
| Live2Read chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
That was great. And despite the other review you got, I liked "I am dead" better than "I'm dead".
| Copper Hikari chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Beautiful peace you have here. My only complaint is that things like "I am dead" probably should be changed to "I'm dead". Otherwise, great job.