|Reviews for The Princess and the Nobleman|
| Jay chapter 24 . 8/13/2016
I enjoyed this story. Very unlike the usual royalty stories. There are places that could benefit an edit & in the future you may look for a beta. Overall though this read fairly smooth & I think you did a good job.
| Jay chapter 20 . 8/13/2016
I thought the dream was a fun touch, but your little notes to yourself really took away from the story.
| Jay chapter 18 . 8/12/2016
This chapter made me feel like we've jumped around & you're now rushing to end. Kagura was originally introduced as Naraku's sister. Since when are Kagome & Inu talking again? I'm assuming they're still a couple, but you only mentioned them fighting about how she should hide. I'm glad Hojo was involved because I had guessed that, but now they're all gone.
| Jay chapter 12 . 8/12/2016
Well that happened quickly. Glad they're together though.
| Jay chapter 7 . 8/11/2016
The chapters are a little short, but I like them. I'm kinda surprised his mother owned the restaurant outside of their kingdom, but the description was really nice.
| Jay chapter 2 . 8/11/2016
I like this story so far. I'm glad you are including Bank.
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 24 . 5/20/2014
This was great.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
| HelleBelle chapter 24 . 11/27/2013
I loved it!
| HelleBelle chapter 23 . 11/27/2013
Awww yay Rin and Fluffy's wedding!
| HelleBelle chapter 21 . 11/27/2013
awww Poor Kags and Yasha
| HelleBelle chapter 19 . 11/27/2013
Sesshomaru has three sword: Tenseiga,Tokijin,and Bakusaiga
| HelleBelle chapter 18 . 11/27/2013
Oh Jakotsu how could you
| HelleBelle chapter 16 . 11/27/2013
I feel your pain and awesome chap by the way. I couldn't come up with a battle scheme like that if my life depended on it(Not really) LOL
| HelleBelle chapter 12 . 11/27/2013
| ellen chapter 24 . 10/23/2013
Very funny, Miroku saying 'your's sperm works' XD