Reviews for VOX CORPORIS: Rebirth
Sammyboy94 chapter 15 . 8/1
Good chapter but please fix the underlining it is distracting.
afan chapter 26 . 6/7
A great fic. Wonderfully written. All in all, a great read (even if it was very long). Thanks for your efforts and willingness to share.
Guest chapter 26 . 3/4
Great story so far! Hope you keep up writing until the very end. Finally getting around to dealing with Draco, can't wait!
GNcat chapter 26 . 1/4
All the warnings about sexual experiences outside of one male and one female were unnecessary and almost caused me not to read the story. The endless animal sex and anal sex were turnoffs for me and going into so much detailed sex I felt kept the story from moving along well. It felt as if you were the one getting off on it and it was not for the reader. To put it bluntly, you don't do erotica well. I Would suggest that you leave that to the pros.
On the other hand, your plots and characterization a were well done. I'm still wondering what happened with Draco.
All this is in my humble opinion.
bleme chapter 4 . 12/4/2014
I'd really like to read this without all the terribly written porn. A 9 inch cock that's fatter than my coffee mug? Get real.

If you liked the great story by MissAssThropic, you won't last through Chapter 4 either.
borg chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
wow this is really crap. how nice of you to continue Vox with this garbage..pls delete this and never write again
Alifromnm chapter 26 . 5/22/2014
I have spent this week reading both stories. I love everything! A wonderful read. I hope you continue this great story.
Noble Korhedron chapter 7 . 1/1/2014
I skipped most of your massive paragraph, NOT because I have anything against lemons, but because a single massive paragraph like that is horrible editing, I.M.O. How am I supposed to keep my place...? :-(
Noble Korhedron chapter 5 . 12/15/2013
OUCH! That "boiling boils" curse sound VERY nasty! On to Ch. 6...
hogwertghost chapter 26 . 12/11/2013
love it just a thought don't the magic world owe harry and hermione a life det they could just call it in or play with it keep up the GOOD WORK love ya
FreeTraderBeowolf chapter 26 . 10/11/2013
As I write this it has been almost five months since an update and while I hope that we will see the rest of the story enough has been done that the possibilities of the end can be seen. While I can't prove it I suspect the end of the story will see Ron, Neville, Luna, Ginny, and Hermoine all team up to remove the threat of Draco when he shows back up so that Harry doesn't have to kill him. Also the epilogue will show the rise back to prominence of the Weasely house standing with the Houses of Potter, Black, Longbottom, and Bones. At least that is one possibility that I see.
SilencedLaughter chapter 26 . 10/7/2013
This is an incredible story, one which does justice to Miss_AnnThropic's original masterpiece. Through it all, you managed to successfully retain the love that makes this tale so endearing and fulfilling to read. In fact, the strength of the bond between Harry and Hermione as you've written it makes this one of the best romances that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Thank you for this, and I hope that you continue with it in the not so far future. I am sure many of us are anxious to see the conclusion to this brilliant story.
Guest chapter 25 . 10/1/2013
Thank you for an amazing story, so far! You have done a wonderful job of taking Miss Ann's fic to the next level... Just wondering now what will happen with Draco? Your obedient reader,
BlackDawgFang (iPad won't login)
Wulffe chapter 26 . 8/12/2013
Very good story so far...

I think that you are doing a good job of continuing from the original Vox Corporis story.

discb chapter 26 . 7/29/2013
Draco's gonna die :)
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