|Reviews for The Fall|
| CatHatGirl chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Wow, it's so teensy! But in a good way.
Once again, a very good fic. No complaints on my part.
| Father Jack chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Nice. It's always good to read something that makes the reader think. You paint the picture masterfully, without overdoing it. I particularly like the way you never explicitly say which characters are here, yet your descriptions leave no room for doubt. Sorry I can’t be critical, there is nothing to criticise.
| Atheyllia Fox chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
I miss you writing drabbles too. It's in pieces like these your word choice shines.
| frogman chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Hmm, so this is what a 'drabble' is? I are intrigued.
And I liked it, too.
| Pat360 chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Wow, your oneshot dealies are all really really good. this one was short, but that's alright. it had some great metaphors
'crouches on the floor like a crumpled butterfly'
- was my favorite. Your style of writing is awesome. )
| TripleS-18 chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
It was really interestingly described, but it's confusing. I can see that your intent was most likely that, but it's to the point that it's a bit annoyingly short, no offense. .o But I kinda get the idea.
But since it's a drabble, then you have nothing to worry about, after all.
| Bob-dude17 chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Its good, nothing to add, nothing to take away.