|Reviews for Drowning|
| PotatoLizard chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
I'm drowning...in fluff! ARGH
Not a bad way to die, especially when you're squealing all the way down...
Thanks for the fic!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
That was good. I was suprised that it went the way it did. I was wondering if Tenten could hold her breath awhile.
Ever heard of the Good Person Test.
| Toph Hitsugaya chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
| Lili Bibi chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
| DominaNocte chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
practicing drowning, eh? sounds like something Gai would do.
| flipflop386 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
aww that was cute, good job. :)
| Nik0laiCarpathia chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I'm not sure what I was expecting when I clicked on your story, but that wasn't it. That was incredible, and you should be proud of your work. Short and to the point, but powerful at the same time.
| Chased-By-Bears chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Absolutely adorable. I loved your almost simplistic approach to the dialogue. The opening line is wonderful; I think the only negative in the sentence right after. It just doesn't flow quite as nicely and I don't think you need to try so hard to explain away the stunning opening line.
Overall, good job. :)
| Crazycally chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
The boys really are rather protective of their youthful flower
| Just Lovely chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
That was made of pure sweetness.
I love Team Gai, they're absolutely adorable and lethal together. This was very well done, I think, the contest for the longest held breath under the water was fun and I liked how you included Tenten's constant dislike to be restrained under the water. And it was a particularly nice touch when Neji and Lee joined her, not alone anymore.
| I.Deal.In.Dreams chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
:) :) :) I love friendship stories. They make me feel so warm and happy and buttery/gooey/delicious. Especially when they're written as well as this one! I really love how you portray the team dynamics. And plus, the tiny hint of Nejiten was irresitable :D
| teamcan chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Aww that was really sweet! Great Team Gai fic :)
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
awwwwwwwwwww how sweet of neji
| bubbles12345 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Loved the theme & great tie with the events of the actual story! Well done!
| TillyMe chapter 1 . 12/29/2010