Beautiful story. You're an amazing writer!
Thanks for sharing this masterpiece!

Lovely job! It’s just like Leo to hide injuries...

I had to binge read, such an amazing story, just breathtaking. So accurate with Mikey's mind,

Read this years ago. Loved it then. Love it now.

Suck it, bitches! I'm the 400th reviewer! Hellzayeah.

Very good story, thank you for posting it.

This is just amazing (**) I love it so much, and you truly are talented! Kudos to you, amazing author!~~

It has been almost three years since I've left my first review on this fic. Last night I sat down to re-read it again and it clarified something for me which is: Yup. Still as good and as entertaining as the first time I read it.

Thank you again for writing this and I am so glad it became an 89 page monster instead of the 8-10 pages you had originally planned!

Pretty sure Leo is hurt in some way. And does Leo have a fever? Is that why he's so warm?

this is one of the best TMNT stories that I have ever read . It's so heartbreaking and I smiled like an idiot at the end. I really liked how you let Mike to care of his big brother while carrying him all the way to the tunnels which were heavy flooded with water and i also loved how you made raph care about mikey and how cute was it when you described in your story how Raph was hugging mikey when he nearly teared up !

I really enjoyed this story! This was really a perfect version of Mikey and Leo. Great job!

Absolutely wonderful! You are truly one of the small handful of good writers out there.

It has been so many years since this was written, but I am glad I have stumbled across this marvelous fic... You have done an incredible job, both at expressing and picturing the situation and characters, as well as at doing the writing itself- fluid, descriptive and with very few mistakes of any kind.
I loved the narration to be from Mikey's point of view, and I think this is one of the best Mikey's P.O.V.s I'be ever read.
This starting as an 8 pages one- shot though, I can't imagine how long the story would be of you had actually planned it to last several chapters I have truly enjoyed all the 89 pages of this, congratulations!

Aww this is really sweet
I just love Mikey and Leo journey
I didn't seem to know how bad Mikey's injuries were
Was his ribs Bruised, Cracked or Broken
Will definitely Favorite this one
Love this story
Bye

Wonderful story
You are such a great author
Good luck

I...dont have any words. This was just awesome! I think there are just not enough words to describe how good this was. I have to admit that this is one of the best fanfics on the ninja turtles I have ever read. I usually dont like stories were there is little dialog because not many writers know how to maneuvre the words so as not to make it boring for the readers. But what you did was not even that. You my friend succeeded in combining the description of their whereabouts, the thoughts of michelangelo, you made us feel the tension of the situation and you were able to show the relationship of the two characters. It was quite remarkable I have to say. In contrast to the show you showed us that leonardo is not perfect, he is not some god who can do anything and find solutions to everything, he can make mitakes, be confused or even get a bit lost. There is much more to him than this Fearless Leader part of him, and I loved how you gave us this new side of him. But as you did with Leonardo, you gave us a different michelangelo too. He is not necessarily the goofy comedian always. He can be serious, he can take the lead and he surely is not stupid or doesnt notice things as alot of other writers think.

This fanfic was incredible, extraordinary, fantstic it just cant be described it was a masterpiece. It was full of plot twists and kept us all in suspense every single moment. It is one of the best fanfics i have ever read. You are awesome and should keep up the good work. I am pretty sure you could be a writer with such a level of mastery. Why dont you try, now that I think about it sounds like a good idea. But anyway. You are full of imagination and your writing skills are superb. As i said you are awesome , keep it up.

This is completely out of topic but I would recomend you to watch an anime named Fairy Tail. It is very good I think you would like it.