|Reviews for Endless War|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
You got talent can't wait for another update
| FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
Wow. Like that long chapter.
| ValidHacker chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
This sounds really good so far.
| Sins of the Soul chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
Pretty good. Sorry so short, it's 12:03 a.m. I'm brain-dead right now. .
| The Fluffy Ball chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Very, very good. I wouldn't have ever guessed that English is not your first language. It's phrased so well, and it's such a good idea, I'm really impressed.
My one itty bitty beef is that Snape seems a bit OOC. It's not a huge case, it's just that Snape didn't seem so snarky as he usually is. Maybe make him growl, sneer, or say something silkily; that'll do it.
By the way, on the same line where they include the italics and bold (when you view the uploaded document on they have a page divider. It might be a good idea to use it instead of the dashes.
Please please continue it. I love the flashbacks, hell, I like your writing style.
| Andi chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
That was a very good first chapter! The meeting was incredible, you played them all really well and that was one of the best impressions I've read on how they met. I cant wait to see where this goes from here. Keep up the good work and update soon please.