Reviews for Confined Concubine
yaoi kitsune chapter 2 . 9/28/2007
I Think kiba is more innocent. He's obviously had a hard life yet he is has still retained some of his innocence, where as toboe has been sheltered all his life, so it isn't so much innocence but more the fact he hasn't had the chance to experience the wider world. Looking forward to the next chapter
Christina chapter 2 . 9/11/2007
Love this story so far. Can't wait to see where you take it!
BlackDove-alchemist chapter 2 . 8/31/2007
This sound interesting...I'd like to see what you do with this. I personally think that toboe is more inocent, Kiba's probaly killed a fair few people...Like in the first eppisode, he kills those random gang people...
vincent-twice chapter 2 . 8/19/2007
w00t. update please! aw, poor kiba! but i still think toboe is more innocent. definitely.

SD
chrono-contract chapter 2 . 8/2/2007
that was AWSOME! please update soon! oh, and if wouldn't be too much trouble, can you change that guy with the gun's name from kai to something else? my name is kai and i feel kind of awkward reading someone with my name hurting wolves (my favorite animal)

thank you!
Yoru no Kuronue chapter 2 . 8/1/2007
Yoru: More please.

Kuronue: I like TsumexKiba...

Yoru: Me too. (eyes Kuronue suspiciously) Anywho, I think Kiba is more innocent, just because he's older and should have more experience. But he doesn't...unless he and Tsume are in the same confined space for too long...(evil grin)
Blitz-Sora chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Update! Update! Update! Sounds like an awesome plot, and this is a great start!
Yoru no Kuronue chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Yoru: Update please.

Kuronue: Like slash...

Yoru: I do. You don't.

Kuronue: I have to get used to it. It's all you write. Even involving Youko and me...

Yoru: So, anyway, we'll be looking for your next chapter. Good job!
evilflynmonkeys chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
why did you make Blue seem like a slutty bitch?
Error In Space chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
I like this! I'm interested now.. so can't wait for more!
Fangsire chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
You've got my attention. What happens next?

By the way, love how you made Kiba come off as care-free for a few moments near the end, but I always felt he grew up too quickly, what with the fire killing his family and all. Look forward to the next update.
Wolfchick 007 chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Awesome!Keep it going!
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