|Reviews for Bottomless Pit|
| TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
A great story. Very good.
| yayalulu chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
That...redemption, caring, feeling, remorse.
This is a really good story. Actually makes me feel for the little squirt.
| EvanescentBeauty chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Wow, this was really good. Very good. I kind of would have liked to see what Quentin said after the Viring poem, but, like in movies, a writer need to know what parts to cut out, and that part wouldn't have really been necessary to the plot, but it would have been nice brain-rot to entertain me. LOl.
Oh, by tht wway, this sentence; "with a taught belly and calm, silver hair." It should be spelled "taut". Taught is like Mr. Keating taught the class. Taut means pulled or drawn tight.
Anyway! just had to say that LMAO