Reviews for Inspirational Painting: Amber themed Life
T.T chapter 6 . 2/17/2008
The devil...?
ShinobiOfTheDarkness chapter 6 . 1/17/2008
?_? Huh?

I can speak French and all, so I'm not complaining about not being able to understand it. But why did you put it in French? This an English fic? I just don't get the point of this last 'chapter'.
oO Yukiko Oo chapter 6 . 1/16/2008
Whoah.

Say what now?
ShinobiOfTheDarkness chapter 5 . 12/22/2007
I'm still confused, (-sighs-) I wish I knew who she was...Guess this means I need to do some more reading. Yatta! I love reading. Hehe!

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Rie-chan
ShinobiOfTheDarkness chapter 4 . 12/22/2007
I'm confused again, I feel so stupid...

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ShinobiOfTheDarkness chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
You still need to work on your editing. Grammar, spelling, punctuation, tenses, things like that. I also don't feel stupid anymore! Yahoo! This chapter really cleared things up. Although I'm not quite sure who that other girl is, I have a few ideas but I'm probably wrong...

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ShinobiOfTheDarkness chapter 2 . 12/22/2007
Um...that chapter left me very confused, especially after what you said in your A/N. I feel so stupid... And screw OOCness, as an author you have the power to what ever you want! Besides having OOC characters can enhance a story if they are used properly and are not overdrawn(Get it? OverDRAWN(this actually a word), and this is about Sasuke drawing. Okay never mind, that was lame, I really do suck at puns...)

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ShinobiOfTheDarkness chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
I don't want to sound too harsh, but perhaps you could have edited more? It's also pretty different, in most high school fics, Sai is the artist. I never really pictured Sasuke as the artsy type, I guess we all can have our hidden talents. Hehe! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

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chocolatetomatoes chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
good story...even though i got confuse it was one of the best story i read
XXRedWolfXX chapter 5 . 7/19/2007
Please Continue! I love this Story a lot!
elloshort chapter 5 . 7/3/2007
I still wanna know who SHE is...I'll wait...
Emilia Mi Amor chapter 5 . 7/2/2007
i luved it!
BlackCat69 chapter 4 . 7/1/2007
im so confused rite now! but its really good, keeps me on the edge. neway, did he steal the painting of sakura cause u said " a girl standing, looking at the ferris wheel with awe" this really through me off if he did cause then at another part u said "actually, I wanted to draw you standing and looking at the ferris wheel. But, that will just have to wait" so did he ever draw it? ok u no wat, its late and my brain probably isnt workin so great rite now and ne else probably thinks im stupid for not gettin it. im jus gunna let it go. its really good. also is this a sakusasu caz sum parts seem lik it isnt? jus wonderin. cant w8 2 c who tha otha gurl is
elloshort chapter 3 . 6/30/2007
The characters are OOC...it's weird to me, but I am curious to who the other girl is. So update soon, Kay?
anonymous chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
hehhe nice ;)
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