Reviews for Complications
amobutterfly25 chapter 5 . 4/11/2008
that is so cool that you are reviving the story i hated where it ended. so please update soon :-)
Just.Kez chapter 5 . 4/11/2008
ok i like this story so far

and i hope i write more

but it would be great to mkae the chapters longer

x
higher hunter aka jo schmoe chapter 5 . 4/11/2008
thanks so much for taking my advice! i cant wait to see the next chapter- take as long as you want, just dont forget. :)
higher hunter aka jo schmoe chapter 4 . 4/10/2008
your doing really good- work on finding your style and sticking to it even people say they dont like it - if you dont like writing long chapters, thats ok, just dont kill us from the wait- dont apologize and keep moving forward- (sorry, it's a meet the robinsons reference there) have fun writing you seem like a natural and we look forward to more stories from you (my mean friend and i)
A person chapter 4 . 12/22/2007
Um... isn't this supposed to be complete?
Nichole chapter 4 . 7/18/2007
still think more detail and longer chapters. Still very good. Try putting more detail into how the charactors are thinking.
angstar54 chapter 4 . 7/18/2007
Oh NO! Carlisle is about to drop the bomb!
Nichole chapter 2 . 7/18/2007
k. Good start but detail is key. Put more in it. The chapts are a bit short...
passionfornight chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Interesting. Another chapter please and hopefully it will be longer.
FangedLeaf chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Good start. It's a little short though...