|Reviews for Self Inflicted Pain|
| Eternalmoonprincess chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
As always, you have written something amazing! I love it :)
| Multi-Facets chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
Somehow, this seems right. There's a lot more depth to Gara than people realize, and he does think highly of Arshes. It really is sad that it's possible she will never see him as a potential lover or husband. DS should not be such a hard act to follow, given how much of a jacka- he is.
There are a couple of misspellings -"forth" for "fourth", which you corrected in one sentence, "alright" for "all right" and "physic" for "psychic"-, and I see some points where you use a period when there should be a comma at the end of a sentence, but other than that, this is a thoughtful piece, satisfying in its simplicity. Well done.