Reviews for Private Ocean
Kamisama Hajimemashita chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
AHH how cute and sexy
WinryRockbellElric chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
This is a great story! It flows easy and its short and sweet. Great job!
Took-Baggins chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
i suppose i would have seen that coming if i'd bothered to notice the rating. still, a nice little fic. i enjoyed it _

you're right, it could fit any het pair, but i do prefer the EdWin. nice job!
Tyan chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
Really, really good. 'Nuff said.

Only there's a spelling mistake here:

" the sensation of being drug under still pleasantly"

It's 'dragged', not 'drug', if you're speaking of dragging. _
Ishte chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
This is particularly nice. The imagery of the ocean waves and the warmth being equated to lovemaking is really neat. Personally, I might be irritated that he hadn't wakened me before he started though hahahaha...

theres a grammar error you may want to correct. "...the sensation of being drug under..." past tense of drag is actually dragged. So it should say "...the sensation of being dragged under..."
Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Oh, my. Quite sexy.
Inuchemist10 chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
yum...lemony! Good job!