Reviews for Private Ocean
Kamisama Hajimemashita chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
AHH how cute and sexy
WinryRockbellElric chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
This is a great story! It flows easy and its short and sweet. Great job!
Took-Baggins chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
i suppose i would have seen that coming if i'd bothered to notice the rating. still, a nice little fic. i enjoyed it _

you're right, it could fit any het pair, but i do prefer the EdWin. nice job!
Tyan chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
Really, really good. 'Nuff said.

Only there's a spelling mistake here:

" the sensation of being drug under still pleasantly"

It's 'dragged', not 'drug', if you're speaking of dragging. _
Ishte chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
This is particularly nice. The imagery of the ocean waves and the warmth being equated to lovemaking is really neat. Personally, I might be irritated that he hadn't wakened me before he started though hahahaha...

theres a grammar error you may want to correct. "...the sensation of being drug under..." past tense of drag is actually dragged. So it should say "...the sensation of being dragged under..."
S J Smith-Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Oh, my. Quite sexy.
Inuchemist10 chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
yum...lemony! Good job!