Reviews for Of Alligators and Sewers
amy jonas chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
Oh my goodness this was better than all those cheezy killer alligator movies combined! You had me alternating between laughter and total freak out for Dean. I could so see the alligators death roll and dean going all crocodile Hunter.

Some of my favorite lines:

Relenting to his brother’s inner hero, Dean sighed and ducked a glob of brown goo, trying not to think about what it could be. Sam had been leading them on this entire expedition, ever the copilot. “You’re pretty familiar with sewers.”

“And you’re familiar with gutters.”

*

Sam jerked. “I know what the problem is.”

“Yeah? Really?”

“All your bitching is scaring it off.”

Walked right into that one, idiot. “I’m not bitching. I’m bored. Fishing is boring, that’s why normal people don’t do it.”

“Maybe you should start barking. Pretend you’re a plump little puppy who fell down the gutter. Oh, and you also have a broken leg.”

Awesome banter...but gotta wonder how in the heck Dean thinks normal people dont fish? He ever see Stargate? jack is always trying to get people to fish. lol And Jack is the most normal of SG1. :) *sigh* lovely banter. :)

*

“Hell if I know- isn’t she hot, though?” Dean swallowed, staring at the swell of her breasts atop her low-cut blouse. His stomach rumbled as she layered cheese and noodles. “I had no idea the food channel was so… entertaining. It’s like porn, but so much better.”

This is like the best line ever in the entire fandome. I seriously love the boys when they get the good meds. They crack me up. I love when they talk through you. :)

and Dean being utterly proud of going up against an alligator. he did something neither John or Bobby ever did. Rock on Dean! Giggle. "The Killing Hour". Love it.

Awesome job, Emily. :)

amy
Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
Oh, very nice. I'm relatively new to the fandom, but I do have an appreciation for a good Hurt!Dean story. I can't figure out if it's more fun to read them or to write them. LOL It looks like maybe I'll be seeing you next month too. (after reading Nana56's review). Can't wait!

Vanessa
inzane73 chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
Awesome! A lot of wonderful banter, and some hurt!Dean to boot. Gotta love it.

You know, that line about yielding to Sam's inner hero, for some reason that's my favorite of the piece. Maybe I just like it when Sam goes hero. Sam should get to save the day more often, poor boy.

Inzane
Nana56 chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
You did really well for a Sam-girl! Great in fact!

So Wolfpup's a Dean-girl, huh? Cool! See you guys next month!
KelBub chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
Hey!

Totally loved this baby! You should write Hurt!Dean more often! :)
Brigid Tanner chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
You do hurt!Dean entirely too well for my liking ; ) It was really funny with the guys snarking at each other (perfect voices) until the gator got Dean. Well written, as always. Loved Dean and the Food Chanel!
pandora jazz chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
Wonderful job as always.

I loved the brothers bantering before the alligator attacked. I knew that it would make an appearance and you had already warned us that Dean would be hurt, but you did a great job on the action/suspense scene and the death roll.

Had to smile as Dean wanted the creature salt and burned, even if it wasn't supernatural. He would be angry at it for hurting him and yet we also know he would be glad it did not attack Sam.

Great job writing Sam as he was trying to get Dean out of the sewers and than using the Impala to help pull him up the lader.

Have to love big brother trying to make Sam stop feeling guilty for not killing the alligator faster.

You did wonderful job of writing a hurt Dean and worried Sam.

Enjoyed your story, thanks for sharing.

On a side note - The more I read about Kazcon, the more I wish I could attend. But so far still looking how to afford it since I've just finished the updates on my house. So in the mean time all I can do is wish.

Thanks again for the new story, take care.
pnuts100 chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
HAHA...that was great like all your story's...i can just see dean being the croc hunter...im a sam girl but i loved it.
Susan82 chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Well, that was a fun little one-shot!

As much as I thoroughly enjoyed the fic, a part of me wished Sam had been on the other end of the alligator's pointy teeth. Don't get me wrong, I really liked the story, but you do such a fantastic job knocking Sam around. I think you've left all us Sam-girls a bit spoiled as to what we expect from one of your awesome stories. )

I hope my annoying whining won't detract from how much I enjoyed the fic. The banter was top notch and right in character, as was each brother's reactions to Dean's injuries. Great job!

-Susan
reading chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Very cute! And also quite tense, there in the middle. Not what I was expecting to have Dean get grabbed by the gator. And my heart hurt for him a little when he was so down on himself for not getting out of the way fast enoughed. Loved how you got him out of that funk - admiration from Sam and the realization that he'd done something his dad hadn't done.
Child of a Pineapple chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Oh, that was priceless.

Yes! I love it when Dean's injured! You know, in that twisted sense of things...

Great job!
Dark-flames chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Oh the wonders of stoned dean ) hahaha... seriously, good job with the dean hurting, enjoyed ever sec... )
bubblesquirt chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Okay! First of all, I just wanna say how EXCITED I was to get an email alert that you had written another story! YAY.

Relenting to his brother’s inner hero, Dean sighed and ducked a glob of brown goo, trying not to think about what it could be. Sam had been leading them on this entire expedition, ever the copilot. “You’re pretty familiar with sewers.”

-You're doing a really good job at grossing me out with all this sewer talk. Ick.

Dean glared. “You are such a killjoy.” He looked around again, then added quietly, “You know, if there were any joy down here to start with.”

Maybe you should start barking. Pretend you’re a plump little puppy who fell down the gutter. Oh, and you also have a broken leg.”

-Haha, see? Sam can have a sense of humor too.

“Holy fuck!” Dean shouted, scrambling backwards as the alligator surged forward.

-I love the use of that curse word! So Dean!

The water was thick and the floor slimy and Dean couldn’t get out of the way fast enough. Pain seared his forearm, rows of teeth puncturing his skin like bullets. Jaws locked tight, the alligator jerked Dean off his feet and underwater.

-No!

The alligator, responding to his victim’s flare of life, thrashed side to side- and immediately cracked his skull against the wall.

-Ouch.

Dean breathed hard through his nose, biting back a whimper as he looked down.

-Aw... whimpering!Dean?

“That Crocodile Hunter was fucking nuts, man. I wouldn’t do this again no matter how many hot chicks were watching.”

-Um, chyeah!

Sam looked at him, a peer-into-your-soul gaze filtered by messy bangs.

-I love your description!

“Not a… girl.”

Sam smiled, leaving one hand on Dean’s shoulder in a prolonged pat. “So you’ve mentioned.”

-So cute.

“You’re stoned.”

“You’re jealous.”

-Hilarious!

Sam stayed quiet for a moment, the beat in time creating a more somber tone.

“Paris is in jail, Dean.”

“Yeah, for like, a day. We’ll just keep the camera angles above her waist to hide the ankle bracelet.”

Sam stood. “I’m gonna go call Bobby. Tell him you’re just fine.”

Watching him go, Dean called, “Tell him we start filming Monday!”

-Hilarious ending. Great oneshot. I can't wait for your next story!
friendly chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
good job.. that was good
Lillehafrue chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
What a great story! The banter betweent the boys was priceless. You caught them perfectly. Alligators in the sewers...who'da thunk? Loved it!
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