Reviews for Lavender Spell
LW12 chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
very good
mousy girl chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
so hot
SquiggleyxSquidxTaco chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Pretty good! This is your first one? WoW! This helpped me with the one im writing. Great job.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Nice it was awesome
Anthony Kellar chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
That was actually kinda good
Firewolf93 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Like your story it was great
almostinsane chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Very well-written. You can see the love between them instead of simple animal lust. Awesome job.
The Unknown Twinkie chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Wow this is good please make more NaruHina
kiuibi123 chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
that was TOTALYY AWSUM!
Anime Freak456 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Great story!
ekiouja chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
dont be to hard on your slef it was a fine lemon
TeenTitanGirl12 chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Actually I liked the part ewhere he stood up to her dad and yelled at hin no one ever yells at him and i THOUGHT IT was pretty brave
SeikoRin chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
for a first try and an unsure thought of the characters, you did this masterfully, most people should look to this for inspiration and a model for better writing
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
i love it
GoingGhost chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Wonderful one shot. Great Job!
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