Reviews for The Blacks I:Winds of Change
Purple Myst chapter 9 . 11/29/2017
WOW Never saw that coming but I love it to the MAX!
Guest chapter 10 . 8/25/2017
I'm not good in writing proper English or any other language. The only thing I saw was using the first verb in past tense and the second also (suppose in present time). For example "didn't do". "didn't did" sounds bad, not?
Guest chapter 6 . 8/24/2017
Excellent story, well written. Thank you. An excellent read and I enjoy it very much.
Shadowstar2015 chapter 3 . 3/12/2017
So is there just no explanation as to why harry was kidnapped by bellatrix?
sexy Seren chapter 7 . 1/18/2017
Interesting
Charlie0925 chapter 20 . 1/9/2017
Great writing here honey! I loved this fic! ;o)
Guest chapter 3 . 11/6/2016
Great and all but the grammar and spelling annoyed the hell out of me, please fix it
Lamorak Korving chapter 12 . 11/5/2016
Mirzam Mira Veracez of Ravenclaw House is one of the most interesting
original characters in "The Blacks I: Winds of Change", and her past
history with Auror Sirius Orion Black III makes for very convincing story.
My other favourite Harry Potter characters are: Angelina Johnson, Alicia
Spinnet, Susan Bones, Hannah Abbott, Penelope Clearwater, Luna Lovegood,
Padma Patil, and from Slytherin, Daphne Greengrass, Astoria Greengrass and
Tracey Davis. My favourite Black Family members are Walburga, Cassiopeia,
Arcturus, Pollux and Orion.
lawlu4 chapter 2 . 10/28/2016
i really love mirzam.. her character is strong i totally over her.. good job with the OC..
Lamorak Korving chapter 13 . 10/8/2016
I was annoyed when Cassiopeia Black realized Homam Azha Black was
really Harry James Potter. Auror or not, Cassiopeia shouldn't have figured it
out that fast. And what the hell was Minerva McGonagall doing at Lady
Black's house uninvited?
CynApp chapter 20 . 10/4/2016
Let me just say that you're awesome and that i love where you went with this fanfic. Once i started i couldn't put it down, i always wanted to read a fanfic about the Black family because i always felt that their lives were cut too short (i.e. Regulus).
Mark Paladin chapter 5 . 9/30/2016
Understand this, pal: you DO NOT suck at writing. In fact, your story is one of
the best I have read in a long time. The most memorable scenes that you
have penned so far are the Azkaban ones with Sirius and Mirzam, and the
Walburga-Homan ones. You definitely have the ability-the quite rare ability, at
that, to infuse your story with humanity and compassion.
Lamorak Korving chapter 4 . 9/30/2016
Frankly, I'm not surprised that Cassiopeia Black couldn't keep her big mouth
shut, given how hostile she was shown to be to half-bloods. I found Lady
Walburga Black realistic, because the way I visualise the Ancient and Noble
House of Black is that they are most likely theatre-goers rather than viewers
of television, and I found Arcturus' curiosity about TV amusing. I thought that
you handled Mirzam's break-down with great care and sensitivity. If only other
writers of Harry Potter fanfiction wrote stories as polished as yours.
Lamorak Korving chapter 3 . 9/30/2016
This story, "The Blacks I: Winds of Change" is a refreshing change from the
stories where Harry is abused by the Dursleys, bullied by Snape and
manipulated by Albus Dumbledore. It is nice to see Walburga Black caring for
Harry-sorry, I meant Homam Azha Black better than Petunia and Vernon, but
anyone would be better than the Dursley family. Amelia Bones, Dowager
Longbottom, the Patil family, Andromeda Tonks, nee Black, and Nymphadora
Tonks, nee Black, but definitely NOT the Weasley family, because they are
Dumbledore's spies.
Blackveil19 chapter 5 . 9/6/2016
Check your grammar please.
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