Reviews for Unsound Advice
Penny is wise chapter 12 . 9/5/2014
Awesome story.
deanandjo4ever1 chapter 12 . 7/15/2012
Too cute. Loved it. When he shaved I was look Jayne Cobb turns into John Casey yum again
Single Silver Eye chapter 8 . 4/10/2012
I must say I like your work. Though I think that you have overplayed Jayne's attractiveness. I look much the same just with less muscle, blonde hair, blue eyes, higher cheekbones and more unruly hair. I'm a pretty boy and I know it but most people don't consider me attractive, or their all really shy. Hope you have a good day and are continuing to work on your sequel to Potter's Protector. I hope to continue to see your work.
Deadzepplin chapter 12 . 2/1/2012
I love how Jayne thought that knifing the older Tams would solve the no sex problem that River was having
BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 12 . 9/5/2011
Well...gotta say that was an interesting way to end the tale, what with the younger Tams getting an eyeful (or mindful) of their parents re-communing with one another. Guess it's gonna be good practice when the Cobb and Tam lines are extended in the future, eh?

Fantastic tale, mjimeyg! This was a pitch perfect exploration of River and Jayne developing something good at a reasonable pace and with realistic obstacles :D
BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 7 . 9/4/2011
Well...you have to give Jayne SOME credit, since if the cathouse served food, it has to have been a higher end joint; most Rim bordellos presumably are more interested in moving the client through the welcoming, choosing and performance process as fast as possible to maximize revenue. Still, I can't believe Jayne wouldn't at least make a passing remark to another crewmember who could have explained what Simon did to him sooner...oh well ;D
BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 3 . 9/4/2011
Well...they're moving in the right direction, but I have to wonder about what will happen if Jayne finds out River's really just trying an experiment to see if he will change for someone if he feels the stakes are good enough. Don't think our favourite merc will be all that impressed...though I think River will come to re-evaluate her own stance soon enough :D
BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
Well...it was the right first step, even if the path is not the greatest in the 'Verse (at least in Jayne's mind). Still, I can totally picture Ron and Adam having this conversation in character and the facial reactions to each other's remarks :D
BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
And...the game's afoot, Watson! It will be a most intriguing bit of sport, to watch Mr. Cobb pursue Miss Tam when she's clearly making things difficult for him. Though I think he will triumph in the end!

;D

Fantastic opener to what I think will be quite the little tale of Jayne getting all kinds of hilarious advice that won't really win him much acceptance...at first. Though I think River just wants to see what his mettle is :P
TheDancingKiller chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
great story want sequel...if u do than add a note on this stoey so i can be alerted lol
ive-already-seen-hell chapter 12 . 8/9/2009
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I WAS ROTFLMAO THROUGH THIS WHOLE FIC! THAT WAS GREAT! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! I want to se what other mischeif the crew of Serenity gets up to in the chapters to follow. Please post as soon as you can. New chapters would be much appreciated! ciao :P
BigT1587 chapter 5 . 11/29/2008
Excellent story. I haven't laughed like that reading a fan fiction story in quite some time. I especially would like to commend you on nailing the characters voices. I do have one small complaint though. When you had Jayne give all the women on the ship presents, one was skipped . I don't know about the females that you deal with,but the ones that I know would feel very hurt and insulted to be left out. Just a thought. Good Job.
bladefax chapter 12 . 11/7/2008
Still laughing from reading this chapter...great stuff keep it up.
Murphyangel chapter 12 . 11/7/2008
Fantastic chapter!
Murphyangel chapter 12 . 11/7/2008
Fantastic chapter!
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