|Reviews for Alchemy's Child|
| violetmusime chapter 5 . 7/21
Your not gonna continue?! * sobs* now that I finally found a xover too interesting to not read... The story itself is a great idea ya know... Please rethink... * puppy eyes*
| Iluvcandyiluvcandy chapter 5 . 6/21
DX ALCHEMY FOR THE PEOPLE DAY I AM CRYING
Also, why do you hate us?
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 5 . 5/26
Ahhh! I loved the interlude. ...Ahh...
Awh, Roy. I kinda hope he might pop by later on perhaps actually. Just a bit. maybe. :P
Totally neat story! I hope you come back to it. It'd be cool to see Harry and the gang learn more fighting skills, and then maybe Ed and Al will join in the fight at the end of the year and perhaps Sirius won't die maybe please *cough* ahaha
It's funny to see Al as a kid and people cooing over him; but he's internally 18, like, "...ACK nii-san help me-!" xD Maybe later it'll be funny because he'll have moments where people are like "...there's no way he did that, he's just 4... O.O" (Maybe he could do some alchemy one time that they're in a tough spot or something. xD)
Great story. Hope you finish more of it some day. :)
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 4 . 5/26
I was hoping for some london-backstory and how he found the magical world and all.
Hey, this is really good! I hope you finish it some day. :)
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 3 . 5/26
Hmmm... I wonder if a hommunculus dying counts to let you see thestrals? And if it's THINKING someone is dead, or if it has to ACTUALLY be a person... Like, when Maria Ross was fake-killed, would that have counted perhaps... xD (tho, wait, they weren't actually there for it. and if they were, they'd know it wasn't real. Hnnnn. I guess it wouldn't. xD)
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 2 . 5/26
Haha! Dumbledore is underestimating him, isn't he. ;D
Heh. But also, yeah... he really is 20, dumbles. :P
| Ren O'neil chapter 5 . 4/30
Very well written, I would love to see Roy find out Ed and Al survived somehow and sets out to find them. Ed actually matured by not reacting to being called short and he actually displays thinking by not resorting to alchemy. Al is so cute. I would love to see Umbridge face off against Ed soon. Should be hilarious.
| Remba1234 chapter 5 . 3/29
Oh god... This was beautiful...
But please tell me you're not dead...?
You must continue this story! You must! This is too good to be abandoned!
| Lorenoide2000 chapter 5 . 3/15
NOOO! You must continue!
| Kitte-Wolf chapter 5 . 1/30
Haha I'm a hypocrite, but I would love to see you finish this. I hate seeing good stories just left to gather dust... I'm sure life is busy, but... I really would love to see more.
| luluhrh chapter 5 . 11/23/2014
. . . Beauty.
All I want is more. Because it's amazing. Please. . . Write more.
| BelloftheSea chapter 5 . 10/31/2014
You know... I put off reading this story for awhile. The summary didn't really interest me. But the five hundred plus reviews intrigued me. And then I saw a picture on deviantart, based on this work, and knew that I had to read it because I just can't resist little Al. So I read it, loved it... and then I realized that it's incomplete and hasn't been updated in years. Now I'm not really one to talk about not finishing things but most of my incomplete works have a very small reader-base (20-30 reviews max). You have over 500 reviews on a story with only five chapters! 500 reviews on less than 20,000 words! This isn't even NaNoWriMo length here. How can you not continue what is so obviously a very popular story? You owe it to your readers, I think. I know that it's been years but it's time to delve back into this wonderful world of writing. C'mon! We're waiting.
| doodlemeow chapter 5 . 8/29/2014
As, the interlude is sad. But in a good way, rest assured.
| Skylar chapter 5 . 7/6/2014
Where is the rest?
| Jaricchi chapter 5 . 5/28/2014
I enjoyed reading this! Thank you for sharing. :)