Reviews for Pretty Boy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your atory |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story! |
![]() ![]() good story |
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![]() ![]() Here from AO3, love your stories and I'm so happy you have them here as well. Can't wait to keep reading, the stories you weave are captivating (though I will probably be over on AO3 because the print here on ff is so tiny). So, hello from a fan 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adore your stories, decided to read the comments and now want to find the next DELETE button for some of them. Your concepts are well thought out and have me reading for days! |
![]() ![]() I'm confused again. I swear Fudge is no longer the minister after he had his trial around the same time as dumbledore, and Amelia was given the interim position with a look to go for the title of minister. There are too many plot holes and inconsistencies in this story |
![]() ![]() I'm confused...first you had avery killed at privet drive. And shouldn't Sirius be dead as he broke his oath that he wouldn't attack or harm dumbledore or moody. I would say killing moody is not allowed |
![]() ![]() Disgusting gay sex scenes. You would think to keep that to yourself. Not that I have anything against people's rights to choose their lives and partners. But no matter what you think, not everyone one in society is comfortable with explicit displays of such relationships. If you wanted to show Lgbt relationship, fine! But keep sex scenes nil, they look vulgar to say the least. Not tasteful, comfortable and likable. On top of that you have an obsession with Severus Snape and showing him in romantic relationship with Harry Potter. Aren't you ashamed to show a man his father's age having sex with a boy his child's age? Or are you used to imagining or seeing adult grown up men having physical relationships with children of their friends, children who are young enough to be that adults own child. |
![]() ![]() What a disgusting filth you have written. Turning a beautiful story into filthy trash filled prostitution filled bin. You turned Harry into a prostitute and AS IF that was not enough showed rape. How disgusting sadistic trash filled mind you can have. |
![]() ![]() good story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() fuck man...this is a jewel! I loved your story. Harry, Severus, Sirius, Remus have been sketched out so well. wow! I love how ruthless they are... oh man this is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story, really love how severus and harry are together. Your harry is awesome, love that he didnt stick around after overhearing Dumbledore. And how confident he is in himself. Like how he told off Walburgers portrait (always wondered why this was never done in the books) And how he loves magic. I also am glad you kept Remus and Sirius around, because even though they completely let Harry down, both characters were manipulated and deserved the chance to grow into who they should have been. Loved the ending for Dumbles, death would have been too easy for him (although what Lily said about the afterlife, I dont think it would have been that easy for him really). thank you for a great story. |