Reviews for Naruto Arashiodori
jjmoses2468 chapter 6 . 1/30
toads not frogs
death390 chapter 3 . 1/21
Problem I have is that any interference for a fighter disqualifies them and the person interfering as well.
Qlf chapter 7 . 1/4
Your story was really sucks naruto is so ooc...
brutusjr chapter 3 . 10/12/2017
Not liking your Naruto in this...

Alvirus-s chapter 20 . 8/18/2017
you know, Konoha is a militaric dictatorship. the Hokage can do what he wants in theory. But otherwise, I really like your writingstyle
Sephiroth'sGhost chapter 61 . 7/19/2017
I'm gonna be honest, I'm kinda miffed/saddened that this hasn't been updated any further in so long. I really have enjoyed binge reading this the past few days and I really want to know what happens next o.o Amazing job btw :) 333
Rick Sanchez chapter 7 . 7/16/2017
Your grammar sucks dick you're so fucking cringy
Guest chapter 21 . 7/12/2017
Ummm. I thought the third's name is Hiruzen not Shibata.
uzumaki-flash chapter 23 . 6/11/2017
D third Hokages name is sarutobi Hiruzen
Guest chapter 3 . 6/11/2017
Naruto is too soft and too OOC..SHIT!
Guest chapter 61 . 6/9/2017
I just got to the end and its been a great story but the one thing thats been buggin me is why jiraiya didnt react more violently to the information of kushinas rape eapecially if they were as close as in the manga or anime. Were they just not as close. Its just been buggin me a bit anyways really good story i hope you keep it up
Blitzstrahl chapter 12 . 5/28/2017
If Gai can solo Mandara. Then Gai and Kakashi can duo Oroichimaru without needing to go in depth.
NatNicole chapter 1 . 4/23/2017
Ooh, this looks interesting!
theta117 chapter 16 . 4/11/2017
naruto's new ability is modeled after "One for All" from Boku no Hero Acadamia isn't it? it has the same consequence that the main character gets when he uses it. including when he used the ability 'Detroit Smash'
theta117 chapter 30 . 4/11/2017
the saindaime hokage is not named shabita his name is hiruen. thats basic shit
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