Reviews for Naruto Arashiodori
OS chapter 4 . 8/13/2007
Original stuff

Simply flawless victory

hope you update soon

bumike99 chapter 4 . 8/13/2007
It's a good story but I am afraid it is going to turn out into a naru/hina/saku pairing and I like neither of them...
Magus1108 chapter 4 . 8/12/2007
Excellent chapter. This is pretty good so far. I can't wait to read more. Update soon please.
Primal Chaos chapter 4 . 8/12/2007
very good is naruto going to go kyuubi naruto or 1 one tail naruto or is he staying normal i personly say 1 tail would be interesting
X18999 chapter 4 . 8/10/2007
story seemed like it would have been good, but its 99% the same as the anime and its taking to long.

it is interesting though, just wish this part would be over with.
The Warrior Within chapter 3 . 8/10/2007
hmm...not too much yet but i believe this could be the start of a great fic
unrealpimp chapter 4 . 8/9/2007
eh no offense but i dont think it was all that good i feelt like i was basicly just reading the episode execpt for some little changes
endofsomething chapter 4 . 8/9/2007
great story update soon!
CW chapter 4 . 8/8/2007
I don't think Naruto's a coward, he's just very intimidated by Gaara and feeling a bit overwhelmed. Gaara did a number on him in Lee's hospital room. I think next chapter he's going to snap out of it and kick some Suna nin butt. I like the way you've done Kakashi, I can seriously think he's a jerk one second and then see his point at the same time, I don't think he's making any friends among his peers. Some day Gai should just smack him one. Hopefully Neji's watching. It's nice Nice chapter and hurry back!
MadnessLover chapter 4 . 8/8/2007
Great story.
KonohaKartel chapter 4 . 8/8/2007
nice and real dramatic at the end
no-blood-in-my-veins chapter 4 . 8/7/2007
Is there going to be a pairing in this? Normally I do not request/suggest pairings but I think that a threesome between Sakura, Hinata and Naruto would be good. Especially with the way you have written it, it seems like a good setup.
Kaori Takaguchi chapter 4 . 8/7/2007
Demonkid chapter 4 . 8/6/2007
k update soon...
Akira Stridder chapter 3 . 8/6/2007
what? Naruto afarid man thats just wrong...
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