Reviews for Naruto Arashiodori
Anonymous chapter 6 . 11/30/2014
Many fanfic writers really need to research more on jutsus. Summoning Jutsu is only a C-ranked jutsu.
Anonymous chapter 2 . 11/30/2014
You should have killed Sasuke...
Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Great job killing Sasuke. That asshole really needed that. The attack is actually Subaku not Sabaku. I like how you made inferences about the Chidori.
Guest chapter 18 . 11/29/2014
I don't get it. What the heck is the point of this story? I see no real development for about 20 chapters from the canon other than a few small differences.
LadyLucyoftheCursedDark chapter 61 . 11/8/2014
Please update soon! This fic has a pretty good plot, and while I'm not normally a Naru/Hina shipper (infact, many time I'm against that ship), this fic makes me really, really support them. I really hope you update soon... :)
Days chapter 21 . 11/3/2014
His name is Sarutobi Hiruzen, not Shibata.
Guest chapter 61 . 9/24/2014
thhis has had and pretty good story that i would hae followed had the last update been 2 years ago..then ago ithat might mean the next update will be anpther 30 chatper i can read
Guest chapter 19 . 9/16/2014
The judge and his council are extremely ilogical, just downright incoherent with the mechanics of the world, You're saying there are no mechanisms to keep their decisions in check ? No authority can question their choices, regardless of how biased they look ? That makes no sense... Either there is a way to record the events of the chunnin exam, in which case Tsunade's claims can't be denied, or the entre decision rests on the hands of the judges, and then it would be a simples matter of what's more trustworthy, their word or the word of the fucking Hokage, as well as the testimonies of everybody present at the stadium. If other villages where anxious to receive the results, I wonder what their reaction would be to finding out only one, fairly weak boy was raised in rank, and conveniently, somebody from Konohagakure. The exams would be completely meaningless if everything depended on the arbitrary choices of a detached comittee line that. Nice story, though
Kyle White chapter 61 . 7/23/2014
This was an amazing fanfic, i loved it. Although it is a shame that you stopped writing this, specially leaving us on a cliffhanger like that :/. But never the less i am glad i read ur fanfic. I sincerely hope you continue
NaruHinaSometimes chapter 58 . 7/22/2014
after 58 chapters, the pairing of naruhina finally appears
Naru'sgirl1032 chapter 47 . 7/16/2014
Naru'sgirl1032 chapter 44 . 7/16/2014
Epic foreshadowing! I saw a lot of it and predict "Suigetsu" was Sasuke, but I'm still freaking out!
Naru'sgirl1032 chapter 33 . 7/15/2014
Oh my gosh! You didn't really kill off Sasuke, right?! I mean, I HATE cannon Sasuke, but THIS Sasuke is amazing! Especially because he didn't leave of his own free will. Suigetsu must be trying to make Naruto mad, right?
Naru'sgirl1032 chapter 7 . 7/14/2014
OH MY GOD! HE'S BACK?! Shukaku...?!
Naru'sgirl1032 chapter 4 . 7/14/2014
I love how you used Haku to help Naruto! A very cool, and useful, idea! Very creative :D
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