Reviews for Apparition
Riene chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
I like this; it's a good additional scene for the musical, yet so sad. I did so want him to reach out, or for her to, but they are both so hesitant and afraid. :(

Very well written scene.
eyeplayclarinet chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
interresting, very interresting...i think i like sad it is not continued, though i dont know how it could
dark-hearted rose chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
wow. a very powerful piece...I could almost feel the tension myself. very well-executed and real. I loved the quote in the beginning as well; nice choice.

warm regards,

dark-hearted rose
sparklyscorpion chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
I'm glad that you decided to post this story after all because I think it's a great fill in for what might have been. I think that both Christine and Erik are very in character and I really like their interaction - both of them wanting to speak to one another, but neither knowing what to say and feeling awkward about it. I feel bad for both of them really, but especially Erik. Great job fair. :)
Mongie chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
Yay Jenn! I like how you picked this moment to write about - it's such an interesting moment (can you say AWKWARD?) and it's so rarely done, imo. I think you really kept up a good mood between them both, and I loved your descriptions! Espcially the looking in or out of the glass one. Poor Christine, it's got to be so much to adjust to. Lovely job! I love it! :D