|Reviews for Parallelism|
| FrecklesAtWork chapter 12 . 9/16/2007
Excellent story; I was a little sad (and surprised) when I saw "Last Chapter" written at the top; but it was a very good ending for this story. I was wondering before whether you were going to have them just come home, or make them save that whole other universe there - which would've taken forever I'm sure.
But yea, really good ending and story! And you're going to have another fic up today! I cannot wait!
| Inkbug chapter 11 . 9/9/2007
Hey there. I just wanted to compliment you on the nice story that you have here :3 I'm really enjoying reading this one- and I liked your other story that you wrote- (Was it called the Time Traveler? -_-; I kind of... forogt XD)
Either way, great job here, my one suggestion is that you sometimes laps into too much dialouge, I've noticed whole chapters where that's all that there is. This chapter wasn't one of them, though, I do understand that when your basing a fic off of a tv show its hard not to.
Keep up the good work!
Cant wait to read more!
| Lacto3.1415 chapter 10 . 9/2/2007
Oh! Surrounded! Sweet!
What's with Wicked, man? She's wicked again! Ah!
Mirror Wicked: That's MIRROR Wicked to you! Hmph!
*starts missing Hacker*
P.S: Between the Lions pwns! :)
| FrecklesAtWork chapter 10 . 9/2/2007
Oh! Awesome ending! I so thought that Wicked was going to shoot Jackie right there - I dunno why, my brain's just a little weird like that. But seriously, great ending to this chapter. I cannot wait for chapter 11 now. Is Digit in on the plan, or whatever it is Wicked's up to here?
Good backstory-stuff here, too. I was just reading along, and it was good and interesting and then bammo, cyborgs and Wicked and pistols. Great update. Well written, too, and good grammar. So that's also a major plus.
| DawnStar86 chapter 9 . 8/29/2007
Whoa! This story is pretty cool! It's nice to get a fresh CC fic like this! I really like what I've read so far. Keep up the good work! By the way, if you want to find other CC fans... z12.
| Lacto3.1415 chapter 8 . 8/10/2007
"Cliffhanger, hanging on a cliff! And that's why he's called Cliffhanger!"
Poor Alliance...poor dudes on the Alliance...poor ignorant Matt and Inez...
Sweet, I can't wait to hear...or read the secret...yeah. Update soon! Muahahaha!
| Lacto3.1415 chapter 7 . 8/3/2007
Jarcimian’s Theory for Time Travel...JT...JTT...JT...just tricking...er...
Yay! They found a way! ...Back! Heh heh!
Sweet chappyter with the random semi-sort of cliffhanger...I can't wait to see who the attacker is!
Tee hee! Update soon...ers!
| FrecklesAtWork chapter 6 . 7/27/2007
Haha, Wicked betrayed by Hacker; classic.
Dude I so want to see alternate reality Jackie and Matt...can't have enough alternate universe/timeline Matts.
| Lacto3.1415 chapter 6 . 7/27/2007
Mirror is such a cool...uh...name thingy...I can't think right now...
Anyways, Captain Wicked is so awesome! Heh heh!
Anyhoots, update soon! Mueheheheheh!
| Lacto3.1415 chapter 5 . 7/13/2007
Yeah, why DIDN'T Inez think of an alternate universe sooner? Tee hee!
Now I wonder what Jackie and Digit are doing in the...uh...normal universe...yeah.
This is getting more exciting...so update soon! :)
| Lacto3.1415 chapter 4 . 7/10/2007
This is getting so good...
If Matt plays with his yo-yo too long, will he become a gangster?
Eh heh, that was lame.
Anyways, it would be fun to visit cyberspace...to explore and stuff. It would also be cool to visit Mars...and live there...and yeah.
| Lacto3.1415 chapter 3 . 7/7/2007
Ya know, when Matt thought "what?" at that one part I imagined it the way David Letterman says it...yeah.
There's no Encryptor chip...muahahaha! OR SO THEY THOUGHT!
Oh, so someone else is from the real world...that was almost kind of funny...like I don't why...it just was.
Okay...so, wonderful installment (it's different! yes!) and update soon!
| FrecklesAtWork chapter 2 . 7/5/2007
Woah, STRANGE. How awesome; I love plot twists and things. Great story so far, very interesting, although I am concerned about Matt and Inez right now; especially since it would look like Matt has to run out of luck eventually. :P
Cool work, looking forwards to chapter 3!
| Lacto3.1415 chapter 2 . 7/4/2007
Sweet...two places at once...I'd love to do that!
Matt has too much luck...we must take away his luck! *grabs all of Matt's luck and throws him into a black hole* Cool...
Everyone: ... ... ...
Dude, Jackie and Digit would look all cool in black uniforms...like seriously...like yeah.
Anyways, another great chapter (this statement is going to be overused...I need to come up with something new sometime). And...update soon!
| Lacto3.1415 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Wow...what a staticky ending!
Okay, I know that was lame...uh...
Hee hee, I love that: arguing about who should have driven during that urgent time...that was awesome!
Geez, an evil mastermind losing his mind is terrible...as it has been proven here!
Great sequel so far! I can't wait to see what happens:)