|Reviews for Acetone Tears|
| Dream24 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
You have left a vivid yet haunting image in my mind. Excellent work and completely in character (aside from some very minor details which totally adds to the story in it's own way).
| Hook Prosthesis chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Wow, I thought that was going to get very x rated very quickly, but then I was like, "YES!" when Jizabel carved out those annoying eyes... *growl* Of course, Cain has always irritated me, but that's just me, I guess, consdering the fact that everyone else loves him... Very well written!
| GrimmXEchelonXShipperXNut chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
That was scary, yet good. LOVED IT
| KuroxTenshi chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
| lunarwolf89 chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
this was a superb story. I really enjoyed reading it. thak you so very much for putting it up.
| Xelena chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
i was wondering if he was going to take his eyes or not. at the beginning there i thought he was just going to molest him. i'm not sure which i wanted more. after all, Cain's missing a part of himself without his eyes. Then again, Jizabel isn't wrong for wanting those eyes - they are quite pretty. well written.
| NeverGrowUp890 chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
*pouts* Cain's eyes! Very sad yet moving. Great job!
| The Grim Phantasm- FEAR chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
I'll admit it- I am usually a critic.
And I usually do not enjoy oneshots.
But, you see, the key word here is 'usually'.
I absolutely adored this story. It was so well written. Envisioning this happening to Cain- it feels like someone has driven a white-hot poker into my heart and twisted it around and jerked it out with the mangled organ still stuck to the end. But that's a good thing... in some wierd, masochistic, Godchild fan way. )
Write more stories. There are not nearly enough Godchild stories on here.
| Fuzzy Niffler chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
I loved this. The prose was wonderful and Jizable is my favorite character so... Yes.
This was pretty much awesome :3
| KousukeAsazuki chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
At least it wasn't smut. Smut with these two would have been really bad. x-x, though, now that this section is up, I'm sure we'll see plenty of it. Nice fic, though, It's.. very bittersweet, because as much as I hate to see dear Cain suffer, I do enjoy the darker side of romance and love- those twisted attractions and desires are always a nice break from the fluff and smut. I just can't seem to write good fics of this sort, though. Wonder why. Hm, oh well, as long as we have writers like you, I won't have to worry about that. Once again, lovely job.
| KaeKaeBeaux chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
oh fuck, i was literally up against my computer screen like "wtf is there going to be smexiness!" then again, knowing Jizabel...so unpredictable -favorites-
| AkiraIshikawa chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
As I said before,
I love your story.
You really should write more.
I love how you played Cain and Jizabel;
I hope to see another.
| kwaiiChan-chan chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
wow! that was really creepy and well written! you also stayed well in character good job!
| Sanguinary Tears chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
This was so beautiful, it made me cry when Jizabel gouged out Cain's mesmerizing eyes of gold. It really was beautiful.
| perishedlove chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Honestly, some may call this gruesome or insanity, but I thought it was the most beautiful thing I have ever read. You conveyed all of Jizabel's morbid thoughts so well. He was completely in character, Cain also. I like the little bit of sinful love you threw in. It was a whirlpool of emotions, and I wish I could write something nearly as good as this. This site needs more Godchild stories like this. I could actually see everything you put in this one-shot happening in the series too. I almost died at how lovely this was, thank you for writing it. I hope to see more.