:D this is neat! Update?

i get that you are rewritting this story, but does it seriously take this long. come on, i'm dieing to read the rewrite and make sure to tell everybody the newtitle if there is one.

Sora: “… Get her.” Lol. Love that last line!

Pretty tranquil chapter, but hey, still managed to get some humour in there! Just one thing I'm noticing, I can't always tell who's talking. Sometimes you have multiple people talking line after line, but you don't say who says what. You just have the words and quotations. So I can't tell if it's Liz, Sora, Donald or Goofy some of the time. Just a suggestion! Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is really good so far. ) Though, I do kinda miss da nobodies... But, a good story will carry on it's merry way, and I have no intention of missing any of it!

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*Still holding her pitchfork.*

Hmph.

I'm not throwing it away, just putting it down.

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I'm really glad you updated though!

More soon?

~Warrior-of-the-Flames

great chapter. why did it take four months to update. though, i have been patient. well, update soon.

Yay! A new chapter! A really long one to! The Organization's falling apart huh? Wonder what's happened. Wonder why Demyx keeps visiting Liz as well... Can't wait for the next one!

ya i'm happy

Better to have a good plot than a rushed one. Take as long as you need!

I only have one word to say to you that is Write!

I wish you luck in figuring out a plotline!

(After all...I'm working on it too and not having too much luck, but I'm lazy. So you'll do better.)

I like the preview you gave us of your new story, and cannot wait till you make that one.

~Warrior-of-the-Flames

that was a great chapter, it relly revealed alot about how much Liz missed her home by her recognizing things that should have been there. but is the would fake? if not, where are the people? update soon. loves Violet eyes

i love this story... update soon please, your writting is awsome!

This was very interesting. I can't wait to read more. Though, to be honest, I miss the Organization members. '( lol, I'm sure they will come back later. I put my faith in you, good ma'm. -salute-

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I love your story!

Update soon! w