|Reviews for A New Companion|
| IndeMaat chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
This needs some work.
For instance, I would like an explanation of why Jack has decided to leave his Team behind after all and travel with the Doctor.
Other things to consider: the Doctor would not call Earth's arctic the North Pole. Plenty of planets have a North. He would be a little more exact as to which he meant.
Also, cold air does not kill people in 30 seconds. Secondly, if it did, putting on a few extra layers of clothing would not keep a person alive for much longer. Think minutes, not hours (let alone days).
And why isn't Chloe showing more emotion over a) the death of her parents, b) almost but not quite freezing to death herself?
Interested to find out though why a Dalek would put a tracer in a ring to follow someone. Daleks are not exactly know for their subtle approach.
| ladysnight chapter 2 . 7/4/2007
what does it want with chloe? dundunDUN! please update again soon!
| Tigerprime chapter 2 . 7/3/2007
Very interesting but what would a Dalek (Dalek Caan?) want with a human child?
| Lady Timelord chapter 2 . 7/3/2007
Great Chapter though, TOP BANANA too you! :P
| Bubblez-rocks-your-socks chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
who is tracing her? Please update soon, or like, they'll be a big pile of bubblez mess on the floor, and we wouldnt want that now would we? :P
| Lady Timelord chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
New story! :D
And it's the Doctor and Jack which is good, and no Martha! :D
But no at you losing the files for The End, that's just not good :(
And, storywise, I do like it :D