Reviews for First Comes Love
MoonIllusion chapter 12 . 5/24/2015
This was such a waste if time. I hate your story.
YaoiHimeSama chapter 12 . 7/4/2014
Hope you update soon.!.
Klow7 chapter 12 . 6/22/2013
Please update.!
demongirl1319 chapter 12 . 10/18/2012
i love it so far so PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
demongirl1313 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
i freakin love it!
iceechica chapter 12 . 8/21/2012
This story has a good plot but it seems that you keep mixing your facts up. Kinda doesn't have parents, but suddenly he has parents, naruto met shikamaru when he was twelve but now it's thirteen. I think you should re-read this and fix the errors because I can't decide whether or not I like this fanfiction. Sometimes is seems like its for the ball rolling but other ones it's like the ball got stuck
ShyNeko55 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
I like :)
who'sthatravegirl chapter 12 . 6/2/2012
It's so OOC it makes me cry. I personally don't think this is how they would be reacting in those sort of situations, it kind of ruined it for me. Sorry .
Rennasakura chapter 12 . 1/15/2012
wth Naruto! you just hurt Sasuke yet again! gosh know how many time it was up till this point of the story uh ? get some thought!
viscomica chapter 12 . 11/27/2011
Hmm...I don't know how I feel about this story, really. At times I think I love it and then...something incredibly unlikely and tragic happens, which makes me feel off, really. I don't know, it's like a very addicting film that you KNOW is just full of drama and angst and yet your eyes are glued to the screen! I like the fanfic, don't get me wrong. I like every fanfic that makes me feel for the characters. It's just I dunno how I feel is all... Oh, well, I am a foster kid myself! But, unlike Naruto, I was adopted when I was a baby. I stayed with my family 'til I became of age and then, thanks to them, entered a good university. So, yeah, I was pretty damn lucky! So when I read how Naruto got his whiskers I was weeping! So, yeah, I felt so sorry for him! So there, I told ya pretty much everything that crossed my mind while reading the story! (Great Crazy!Gaara, btw!)
Peanutbaby86 chapter 12 . 11/6/2011
awwwww...y is naru such an A****le...;(

but, i luv this story...i like how sasuke is so different from any other typical broody, glaring sasuke thing...

i realyy wanna know the ending of this story...but, its been a really3x long time since u last update...

do hope u continue though...(
Aniki chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
XD I love Naruto!
IucunditaFloridus chapter 12 . 12/28/2009
update soon. its going great!
Sparky-hime chapter 5 . 11/3/2009

No! Naruto wants Sasuke, stupid bastard policemen! HATE INO!

*wails in distress*
Animal Arithmetic chapter 12 . 9/13/2008
I am so addicted to this story... It's great! :D
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