I honestly lost my time on this story . The enemy became more powerful out of nowhere .

Nobodies shitting on ShatnerTrek these days, that Avenger trilogy is gold standard compared to frakes and co that have skipped on out pretending like their shit don't stink lol...

Sorry about leaving few reviews. I leave them occasionally when reading on Desktop. Excellent story, I enjoyed Apophis far more than I did Anubis. That was true in the original series as well, but here Anubis was majorly carried by Loki. Baal didn't receive his due attention, his intellect came across but not his charm in his scenes. Thanks for the story :)

Did not like them leaving behind Fifth. He is a security threat to be sure, far worse than Nirti or any other prisoners due to how easily he could escape and propogate, but the lack of deliberation or hesitation is frustrating. If the Aschen can be salvaged, surely 5th can?

The idea that Loki is using Earth to hone his military capacity in preparation for the Replicators was a good touch. It makes the fact that Earth stands a chance make sense, and the gradual escalation could be him splitting his attention, letting the AI gather data while he works on the more pressing issue of genetics and technology viable against Replicators.

Good solution to the Tok'ra problem. I enjoy the fact that you make actual changes to the story and use the technologies gained throughout the journey. It was one of the more annoying things about Stargate. It is one of my favorite shows, but that writing flaw...

Dark but well done. It's easy to separate yourself from the reality of XCOM.

It's hard to believe that Kinsey isn't a traitor. Even without the benefit of hindsight, his actions are always self serving and always disastrous for humanity. The NID stealing from the Asgard and the Tollan is a big brain move.

Sorry for not leaving reviews. At the end of a chapter I just want to get to the next part of the story. The mesh between Stargate and XCOM is excellent. The fatalistic attitude of the XCOM personnel vs. the more hopeful SGC is well balanced. You've also managed to develop the allied races and the Goa'uld fight for supremacy was never this well explored in the show.

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You scared me with that note. I saw abandoned first and was worried despite the fact that the fic is marked as completed.

I'm enjoying the way you are weaving the two verses together. Not sure about choosing early McKay for the story. The McKay we get in Stargate Atlantis is a vastly different character from the obnoxious guy we meet in 48 Hours. That McKay is socially inept but at least competent, early McKay is wrong about everything to serve as a foil for Sam.

Awesome story

Switzerland is also heavily armed and has one of the Largest military stock piles in the world

I can't believe you endorsed that single use naquadah potassium fuckshit miscartiage they made up for [S1E15 - Singularity] which I assure you is the first and last time Stargate Itself Endorsed it, it was essentially retconned like the Zat's Three Shots Disintegrate ability