|Reviews for Legacy of the Rasengan II: Makaze Rekidaishi|
| narutorulz95 chapter 7 . 5/20/2009
nauto a clone. was it really needed?
| Yami Vizzini chapter 8 . 3/7/2009
Well, even if this arc was cut short, the big battle was resolved (even if Oro and "Tenshi's" fates weren't), so I feel fulfilled. There are just a few extra plot elements for Part I; they didn't necessarily have to be resolved here, so this is a decent interlude. Great read!
| Sakura Reservoir Chronicles chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
| Bulletdodger chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Wow, you get a 100 reviews per chapter!
| MsSuzuYuki chapter 7 . 1/9/2009
You know, listening to background battle music from Gundam Seed Destiny (specifically 'Kira, Just As He Pleases') REALLY helps the battle! XD It was better then listening to some sort of cheerful music during a serious battle (which, I admit, I actually do do that ;)
Ah... Now, excuse me as I continue to read the story! XD
| MsSuzuYuki chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Your story is getting me hyped up and READY to continue writing my own stories! (to which I left for a while in favour of reading this and other stories... ;)
Ah... Now, back to the story! XD
| InARealPickle chapter 8 . 10/2/2008
I think I liked Rasengan II even more than Rasengan I
I can't wait to get started on I!
I'm also excited that Naruto isn't a clone after all! That was quite a trick you pulled there. People who actually had to wait for the update back in 2007 must have crapped their pants when the truth was finally revealed.
| InARealPickle chapter 7 . 10/2/2008
Ah So only the one clone survived
Despite the set-up, I really wasn't expecting Naruto to be a clone. That's probably because I didn't get into fanfiction until after the truth about Naruto's paternity was discovered. It's an interesting take none the less. It's a neat way of explaining how this Naruto's though processes are the same to the point where even the steps to the Rasengan were the same.
| InARealPickle chapter 6 . 10/2/2008
OMG What are they going to do with 50 freaking Sasuke clones?
Konoha will be overrun with them! No one will be able to tell any of them apart! Credit will be difficult to establish and easy to trash thanks the the risks of identity theft! Any enemy who wants to infiltrate Konoha will simply henge into Sasuke and pretend to be one of his 50 clones... and who would be able to tell the difference!
I wonder if fifty Sasukes will be enough to sate his fanclub...
On another note
I think that Sakura's fight is the best one you have written up to this point. It was captivating and perfectly choreographed.
| InARealPickle chapter 4 . 10/2/2008
Loved this chapter.
Anything that gets rid of Naruto's whiskers and the god aweful red eye makes me happy. I don't even mind that it turns his eyes green.
This was cute: What Iwayama saw happen next wouldn’t have been out of place in a manga.
| nightwind83 chapter 6 . 10/1/2008
as for the battle sceane with sakura. i liked it a lot. it had a choppy flow that fit very well with the chaos of battle. like it was pieced togetather form asuma and other people who were nere by report of what they saw of sakura fighting
| Mazda Tha Crazy chapter 7 . 8/7/2008
You have got to be kidding me, you make Naruto suddenly Minato's clone..? I haven't read the anything else. but that's retarded.
| Mazda Tha Crazy chapter 4 . 8/6/2008
I actually like his nine tails forms better.
| Mazda Tha Crazy chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
wait.. when did they get the five tails? and.. they defeated the 4 tails so did they capture him to?
| aojk chapter 8 . 7/22/2008
After reading your Legacy of the Rasengan I, I honestly feel that Part II is a disappointment in my opinion. I didn't review in part I but I feel that your story can be improved. For one, your story is one that has many different events occuring but not much feelings involved.
I read your story at times skipping some portion of it as I find it either too lengthy and long winded at times. To me, your story lacks a punch! You try to focus on too many characters which undermines my interest as a reader. This being a ff, you can depict your character in any way you like but to improve, your story should cause a flurry of emotions in your readers...
I recommend you to read A Mother's Love by Lord of the Land of Fire. In that story, you can almost feel the character's coming to life. Good effort in writing your stories though! Try to focus more in your character development of Naruto and build your other characters around him. Naruto is creating too many jutsus and it gets very confusing I believe to your readers! My 2 cents worth.