Reviews for Too close for comfort
Rachel Wilder chapter 4 . 6/24/2008
I really enjoyed this-I hope maybe you'll pick it up again someday. You have created a wonderful start. I really am enjoying the plot and you're a very good writer. Looking forward to seeing some more, I hope!
aenpaesum chapter 4 . 7/12/2007
I can't wait for the next chapters, and angsty is good! Bring it on.
FemmeArtiste chapter 4 . 7/9/2007
I like your story. Can't wait to see how Ray and Neela come into contact with each other! Great job.
heatherlynn28 chapter 4 . 7/8/2007
i love this story .i can't wait till their together forever but yes i know they have to deal with the past .she must explain to him that she was breaking up with gates when he saw gates touch
xblissfuloblivion chapter 4 . 7/7/2007
Fantastic chapter! Sadly no Ray and Neela yet but at least we met John :) Looking forward to the next update!
starrylaa chapter 4 . 7/7/2007
Another good update, can't wait until Ray and Neela actually meet. Although not too sure who John is in relation to Neela and why they're at the Olympics? You probably already mentioned this at the beginning of the story but I have forgotten!
siddika chapter 4 . 7/7/2007
Great job.
docrock06 chapter 4 . 7/7/2007
Great update...hope for another one soon!
aenpaesum chapter 2 . 7/6/2007
I loved this chapter. I only have one nitpick- the sentence "his denial of the fact that everything was going to be alright became lost to him and suddenly he struggled to find purpose in his shattered life." from the context it seems like you actually mean his "insistence that everything was going to be alright" or "denial of the fact that everything might not be alright"?
heatherlynn28 chapter 3 . 7/6/2007
this is both exciting b/c of the anticipation yet sad too cause they desperately love and miss and obviously need each other .please let them have the life they want
starrylaa chapter 3 . 7/6/2007
I am really enjoying this story, it's very well written and portrayed. Looking forward to an update!
docrock06 chapter 3 . 7/6/2007
Great update...i hope that you update soon!
xblissfuloblivion chapter 3 . 7/5/2007
Another great chapter! lol you first had me confused in the beginning with the dream sequence! Looking forward to the next update!
siddika chapter 3 . 7/5/2007
good job.
heatherlynn28 chapter 2 . 7/4/2007
love it it's also a little sad they both are desperate to be together yet each think the other doesn't want or need or love them how wrong they both are .they do need each other to be whole and neela needs ray's love and suport to get over her guilt to be able to move on together .ray needs her to help him come to terms with what happened and to have a life with
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