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Sayoko-chan09 chapter 5 . 8/19/2008
hmm i like it...i feel sorry for soubi though...maybe sometime you might put in a chapter what happened to soubi..- but thats all up to you. hopefully you should update soon.
A Single Fragile Rose chapter 5 . 3/19/2008
AWESOME...I REALLY LIKED IT.

SUPER...LOL

WELL, I HOPE YOU WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER.

GOOD LUCK.

OH, I READ THAT YOU WERE SAVING MONEY TO GO TO JAPAN, YOU CAN DO THE ''FORIEGN EXCHANGE STUDENT''AND...HEY IM SORRY BUT I GOTTA GO PLEASE WRITE BACK MAYBE I COULD HELP YOU?

WOW, THIS IS WEIRD BUT GOOD LUCK WRITING YOUR NEXT CHAPTER.

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Kyla45 chapter 5 . 3/7/2008
wow. what can I say? I devoured all five chapters; this is brilliant. Beautiful. I'm really loving it. It's a very moving piece of written words. The emotion is not depicted as rudely or plainly as it's so often done elsewhere. This is really brilliant. I'll be waiting for more.
304 MACaBRE chapter 4 . 10/10/2007
Hi!

First off, I can't understand you people who are complanining about the length of the chapters. The story's food just like this, no need to improve.

I like very much the way the story's going, you're also a good writer and I hope you'll continue this soon :)
CrowningMe chapter 3 . 9/19/2007
Its really good i ejoyed how it was written from Ritsukas point of view.
Sonya4ever chapter 3 . 8/10/2007
It;s confusinf, but good. Soubi died and he ran out of his house away from his mom and net that dude and now he is trying to get an aprament.I think that's what going on must I ask..Does Soubi really die? And second I must say..THE FIRST ONE MADE ME WANT TO CRY..and that's been hapenign alot since I got on here last night and I never cry like that because of books and stuff that takes forever to read(It's like a differnet case of ADD...)
I-Plead-Obsession chapter 3 . 8/6/2007
Dear lord... this is quite pitiful.

Your writing is good, but your length is idiotically short. Your 'chapters' can't even be called a chapter. Technically these are a bunch of short drabbles that are linked together.

Please, do not call this a fanfiction. It's a disgrace. This 'story' is merely drabbles. Do not call it a story let alone a decent fanfiction.

Your writing is good, but your chapter length leaves me feeling otherwise.

Kou-Shuurei.

Ps: the reason why i'm on ch.3 is because I had some insane hope that your chapters would get longer. I'm sorry, but I guess I was wrong. Keep up the good writing... just make it a hell of a lot longer.
Lovelessdarkness chapter 6 . 8/1/2007
I love it. Please keep writing.
XxkrystalmethxX chapter 2 . 7/14/2007
im intriged (lol at spelling) please continue
Bel-chaan chapter 2 . 7/5/2007
Please update it!

It's so sad! T.T

Poor Ritsuka!

Keep going, it's very good!
Naikoru chapter 2 . 7/4/2007
aww this is sad do more
XIXDeadGirlXIX chapter 2 . 7/3/2007
This chapter was very good. you really expressed Ritsuka's character. one part thats got me highly interested is the

"A book slammed onto my desk and my instant reaction was to jump about two feet into the air at the sudden sound. It was a textbook. I looked up to see who made said action but I only saw an empty classroom." the reason why i'm so interested in this is it got me wondering "is Soubi's spirit haunting Ritsuka?" I really want to know! Damnit I love strories like this! Update soon PLEASE!
KyoSohmaLuver chapter 2 . 7/3/2007
This is good so far! The chapters are short, but that's alright.
XIXDeadGirlXIX chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
okay, you've got me hooked! please wright more and if you could, in longer chapters. Its awesum and I'm dying to know how Soubi died. oh and nice job on killing him, most people don't kill him in thare fics because they don't have the heart to.

but I'm glad that you did its a nice change. (sorry I'm very morbid and I'm killing Soubi in about two or three of my fics aswell.) Great job,keep up the good work! _