Reviews for When You Can Only Dream
SkyBlueCivic chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
Ignore the bad story was good and I liked try to give more dimension to the characters,and make it a little longer.
Hisa Kumini chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
It's not bad, but I'm not going to say it's exactly good either. It's a little short, and the characters seem flat. Maybe work on giving them a bit more personality, even if it means writing a heck of a lot more to do it.

Plus, it's spelled EDI for Extreme Deep Invader.
Delusional Illusionist chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Ignore the last review. They're wrong. You are a great writer. Seriously. I really liked this.
Hallie Hutcherson chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
I didn't like your story. No offense but it was very lame. You are not a writer. So just STOP!

Anywho. Keep your day job.
megumisakura chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
write more,please.
Kakashi Kat chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
I like it, it was a nice little story.