Reviews for Flame of Desire
yoh chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
yoh. you need more... and the stuff aint exactly pg im sorry im not trying to be mean it was really good but maybe next time alittle longer
Nottoca chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
oh - i like! i just love the image of roy being chased around by hawkeye with flames everywhere.
MoonStarDutchess chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Wonderful writing as usual. :)
Perennial Rhinitis chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
I find this funny. I know that this one's under Drama, but I can't help chuckling at Mustang.
winglessfairy25 chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
haha. Roy really did betray Riza. that part was soo funny. Great job. they were caught red-handed. LOL

Erinn~
OTP chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
roy how could you sell her out like that lol wonderful job
JenovaJuice97 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
o cute i like it
strandedthought chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
poor Roy. Nicely done!
rizahawkeye28 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
I like the the did well.