|Reviews for Flame of Desire|
| yoh chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
yoh. you need more... and the stuff aint exactly pg im sorry im not trying to be mean it was really good but maybe next time alittle longer
| Nottoca chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
oh - i like! i just love the image of roy being chased around by hawkeye with flames everywhere.
| MoonStarDutchess chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Wonderful writing as usual. :)
| Perennial Rhinitis chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
I find this funny. I know that this one's under Drama, but I can't help chuckling at Mustang.
| winglessfairy25 chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
haha. Roy really did betray Riza. that part was soo funny. Great job. they were caught red-handed. LOL
| OTP chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
roy how could you sell her out like that lol wonderful job
| JenovaJuice97 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
o cute i like it
| Causmicfire chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
poor Roy. Nicely done!
| rizahawkeye28 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
I like the the did well.