Reviews for Love Hurts
Guest chapter 4 . 8/25/2015
You should have made it longer
ProjXPsyClone chapter 4 . 5/10/2010
Getting so interesting.


I really do hope that you continue this.

Update soon, alright.

Thank you
ProjXPsyClone chapter 3 . 5/10/2010
That was low even for you Sakura..heh..


It's getting so interesting...

Keep it up...

and watch out for the grammars and typos.

Thank you
ProjXPsyClone chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
It's getting so interesting.

Really awesome stuff.

But yeah there's some grammars and typos here and try to clean that up...

and the comments within the writing...

Really awesome stuff.

Keep it up
ProjXPsyClone chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
I see some grammar and typos here and there but other than that...

It's a really AWESOME story...

I really hope that you consider continuing it!

Acumichi chapter 4 . 9/21/2008
omg i love gaahina keep writing plz
Gaara's Little Girl chapter 4 . 8/23/2008

Gaara, Sasuke, Naruto, Sakura, and Hinata should all go on a really long mission and Naruto could realize he likes Hinata! Or something. I don't know.

Your skills are really good! But you seem to have a thing for interrupting yourself telling the story, and replacing 'Here' with 'Hear'. Keep an eye out for that.

Other than that, THIS IS AMAZING! Please continue with it, I'd love to see more of this! And if you ever need help with this, just PM me! I'd love to help, because I hate to see a good story deleted.
JayT11111 chapter 4 . 5/28/2008
Aww that was a short chapter DX but still very good XD

Good chapter and I can't wait for the next! XD
JayT11111 chapter 3 . 5/28/2008
Bad Sakura *hits over the head with a frying pan*

Aww poor Hinata but I'm sure she'll get over it since she's with Sasuke XD

Anyways good chapter!
Kiwipie chapter 4 . 5/6/2008
WHOOHOO! Update soon!

And, you warned me in your reviews ur stories were bad. They aren,t. Seriously. I like them!

All you need to do is improve your spelling and grammatical errors. I also think spacing your paragraphs out more would help.

Kiwipie :)

P.S. I hope I helped. PLEASE don't feel any offence to my previous sentences, I'm just trying to give you some ( I hope useful) advice! :D
Kiwipie chapter 3 . 5/6/2008
WRONG WRONG WRONG! She is not 'your' Sasuke you idiot Sakura! Hinata deserves him!

And what the hell did Sakura just call Naruto? Sweetie-pie...? Weird!

Kiwipie :D

P.S. I have no idea why I keep signing my name...ah well! I would say update soon but there's still one more chapter to go. *smiles*
Kiwipie chapter 2 . 5/6/2008
YEAH GO SASUKE! And yeah that DOBE is notworth Hinata's time!

Kiwipie 0.o I think I'm going crazy...
Kiwipie chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
ah! Naruto's so blunt! 'I think you're weird.'

Well...i kinda burst out laughing when I read that, but it is BLUNT!

Poor Hinata though...

Kiwipie :)
SarahiNia chapter 4 . 4/27/2008
hehe thats a cute story i love the gaara hinata its cute you should right more of that and i really love the story keep writing and updating soon! cant weight
JayT11111 chapter 2 . 4/21/2008
XD Oh my, did I read it right or did Hinata really kissed him? XD Gets goosebumps!
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