Oh, I LOVE this Harry!

also why do the key thing when we know that harry did just enter his vault in book 2 easily when he was with rhe Weasleys so that eould logically mean that he has the key to his vault, do writers have an allergy to logic cause why do you have to write this convuluted bullshit just for harry to have a key that in canon he easily has in possession.

also there is nothing in canon that says that dumdledore controls his vault, he just has the key, as he would get it when he went through the stuff of james and lily adter they were dead, more convoluted bullshit just for you go make harry more suspicious towards Dumbledore, god i thought this was going kinda well despite the mishaps, but this tropey bullshitness, it just sucks man, you have written soemthing original but no some tropey bullshit is what we need, idnint know how can you think to have your own orinal characters when you cant even write borrowed charcters and a world, if you are just going to use some bullshit ass tropes that are squeezed to hell and back.
also another trope, helpful goblins when in canon they are self serving bullshitters.
also why would wills be written by the goblins, it would be wizard job so it should be the work of the ministry, no fucking wizard would entrust goblins to store and write wills ehen they don't know if they could change things, it is just good enough that they are storing money and other shit for them.

also they just straight ip hated harry due to him being magic and him. being the son of lily and james that petunia and vernon both hated, and they both suck so they hate harry due to him being the son of the hated james and lily.

also, also since you brought it up your harry is realy jsut a garry sue here, no flaws pretty much and he is treated like the saint.

why a trust vault? just why? why do uou peopel do this? there is only a single vault and it is not a trust vault for harry, itbis simply the potter vault that james handled with Lily. god it is just so annoying .
god os annoying and cringe for you to do this

you know i can see harry is opening up more, so it is nice

so you following the movie canon not the books, seriously?

ok so you are using both books and movies, ok i guess?

also why are you trying to make mcgonagall here like snape, there is nothing in canon that says that mcgonagall only gave points to gryffindore, you are just trying to make the slytherins gain sympathy csuse you know you can't write canon slytherin with harry in it so you have to do this bullshit to let us be sympathetic to them.

also they buy their own gloves not get from the school.
so just changing whole personalities of canon characters like pansy here, why am i not surprised.

also, we see that there is magical theory taught in charms, i think, so they wouldn't just start straight up casting spells from day one, there would have been some theory and i see no theory taught here, so why do you not think logically and hell why not take something from canon and do something like that and still be different ?

also, malfoy is kinda of a douche and a mediocre wizard like his father, he barely gets on due to his money and also also he is a hardcore racist he wouldn't just shrug Harry's argument like that.

i dont know how he got into potions for newts but maybe he did or maybe jkr didn't think much of it.

also why glaze malfoy so much, he is kinda a mediocre wizard.

he is too much of a passive bitch here, in the hooks he actually had the balls to stray against the grain, he asked the hat to ho not into Slytherin, he doesn't really have the same reaction as he has when meeting malfoy cause he literally knows that malfoy is a bully like dudley, so why would he go there, he just doesn't seem brave here at all and that kinda sucks so he is already ooc.

So far it's a fun read, but one thing I always thought strange was that everyone who keeps putting Hedwig ibto the story just says "Harry remembered something and gave her that name" in the school books he read after getting back to the Dursleys.
I always thought of it important, because that one simple moment showed that Harry does in fact read books and studies, he just isn't a Hermione. But he still tried to learn more, which is often ignored in fanfics in order to make him extremely stupid or to make him supersmart by suddenly just reading books, which he never did before.

...sorry for the tangent, but it was always something that annoyed me in fanfics.

I'm loving this book, but didn't Harry have black hair?

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So sorry to see you go, this is an amazing story and I hope someday you can come back to it (or are secretly working on it and will one day post the whole 7 years!) But I understand life has a way of doing its own thing.

There is so much about this story I love, I wish I had reviewed each chapter but between downloading it to an ebook reader so I can read it more comfortably and always wanting to get to the next chapter NOW, I never left one. I'm sorry.

I hope this guy teaches him all sorts of new things. And even if he isn't the greatest I'm sure he will be better than the other option. I really want to know what you would have as his animagus form and I hope you will bring in Luna and use Neville more.

I love your details about the classes. Alot of writers don't include that and just get to the "story" part. I think its really important to the immersion to see what they are working on.

But most of all, the whole reason I found this story is because I love the Weasley twins. And I think you really did them justice here. I cant think of a story with them in it that I love more.

Thankyou so very much for all the time and effort you put into this story!

I enjoyed the story. Very original. Have you given up on the sequel?

I think this must be my second time reading it. I sort of remembered the plot. It was fun to read again so thanks for leaving it up for our entertainment.
FF says I left a review before so I came back a chapter to leave another! Just so you know it is still appreciated.