Sorry about the guest review, it doesn't let me log in on mobile and I only use mobile, haha.

So sorry to see you go, this is an amazing story and I hope someday you can come back to it (or are secretly working on it and will one day post the whole 7 years!) But I understand life has a way of doing its own thing.

There is so much about this story I love, I wish I had reviewed each chapter but between downloading it to an ebook reader so I can read it more comfortably and always wanting to get to the next chapter NOW, I never left one. I'm sorry.

I hope this guy teaches him all sorts of new things. And even if he isn't the greatest I'm sure he will be better than the other option. I really want to know what you would have as his animagus form and I hope you will bring in Luna and use Neville more.

I love your details about the classes. Alot of writers don't include that and just get to the "story" part. I think its really important to the immersion to see what they are working on.

But most of all, the whole reason I found this story is because I love the Weasley twins. And I think you really did them justice here. I cant think of a story with them in it that I love more.

Thankyou so very much for all the time and effort you put into this story!

I enjoyed the story. Very original. Have you given up on the sequel?

I think this must be my second time reading it. I sort of remembered the plot. It was fun to read again so thanks for leaving it up for our entertainment.
FF says I left a review before so I came back a chapter to leave another! Just so you know it is still appreciated.

This getting irritating. You have internet im assuming. Google finite incantatum and figure it out. I saw in one of your ANs you mentioned the books. Did you actually read them? Lumos lights the tip of your wand Nox extinguishes it. Not rocket science here. Finite is used to end the effect of an active or ongoing spell or jinx. Also your fic is a chore to read this is where i give up

I’m getting the feeling you either have no knowledge of the wizarding world or butchering it to feel like your fic is unique. Fyi you dont use finite to end a levitation charm.

I suppose there is no chance of an update as this was last updated just months after I was born.

I keep going back to read this through the years, and it's still as good as the first time I read it. Please tell me the sequel is still in the works and we've not lost you as an author?

First; Your story is brilliant thus far, and better written than a lot of fanfics! _

Secondly... You seemed interested in improbing your writing, so SERIOU Kudos for that!

And I have two recommendations for you for it;

1. Get Grammarly. It spellchecks AND checks your grammar. Which essentially makes it work as well as a very rudementary Beta Reader. Lol

2. Read over your story and edit it at least ONCE after it's done. My stories improve massivly when I started doing that, and it's a small and easy thing too. (Changing sentences to sound better, catching writing errors where you misspelled Beer as Bear and suchlike that spellchecks won't catch because they're both words.)

3. Watch some writing videos on YouTube. Brandon McNulty is a published writer who has brilliant tips and his videos are entertaining and easy to understand and use.

4. When writing Villains, ESPECIALLY if you write dumbledore as the Antagonist, do NOT make them evil because they're just bad people.

Everyone has a reason. Everyone is good and virtuous OR have some excuse that is a DAMNED good excuse in their own eyes to do what they do.

Sociopaths don't make excuses, but they also don't UNDERSTAND WHY something is bad.

(Hitler honestly believed he was doing the right and morally good thing, and he DID help...germans. He was a good leader -but only for germans. People tend to forget that because he was a compleate asshole to everyone else.

Voldemort is a scared child stuck in an orphanage, where Power and Magic is the only defense he has against those who will hurt him.
He also carries a terrible anger, like abused children often do.

And he STILL lives there, in his mind. Disrespect is the step before someone beat him up. Those feelings run deep.

Plus, his life has made him a sociopath. OR he was born a psychopath like dumbledore said, but I am doubtful to that.

Dumbledore always treated him as if he was Evil, and guess what? People become what you expect them to become. Children more so than adults.

I could go on, but you get the gist.)

And to a sociopath, killing and drinking tea is on the same moral level. Try to imagine if someone told you that drinking tea or petting a cat was bad an evil and you shouldn't do it. How would you respond?

If you do those, your writing will keep improving and be more and more awesome.

Not that it isn't already great. _

The Author might not count that as a meeting. They kind of said 10 words to him and then ran off. I might count that as a strange encounter rather than a meeting

Didn’t Harry meet the twins first before he got on the train? They helped him put his trunks on the train. Pg.94

yea its just stupidly annoying now. going in circles.

Really good writing and very interesting ideas although I think your summary didn’t quite portray the plot too well. Obviously with all your favorites/follows that’s not much of a concern for you. Would’ve been interesting to see how this story played out though especially due to the changes you made to canon stuff

Gotta say the whole 2 paragraphs at the beginning and end of every chapter is super annoying…

will you never continue this then?

While I liked reading the story, the ending was really unsatisfactory. Many questions were left open for a sequel that didn't come. Worse however is, that the huge built up about guardianship and custody is solved in a rush with a stranger appearing.
It feels like the writer wanted to finish up quickly and the quality of the writing suffered for it.
I'd still recommend the story, since for the most parts, I really liked it. I wouldn' have read it through to the end if I hadn't.