Reviews for What If the world turned its head sideways |
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imgonnadie chapter 2 . 7/17/2007 Interesting start to your story. Please do continue to write. |
Memory King chapter 2 . 7/11/2007 Nice start, looking forward to more. |
Spellcaster Hikaru chapter 2 . 7/11/2007 Yay new chapter! X3 I love the fact that Harry's in Slytherin! X3 After everyone's greetings to Harry I'm actually getting a bit more fond of them than I used to be. X3 Yay Slytherin! Hopefully with him being friends with both Fred and George (Ron's rather biased so I'm not sure if he'll want to stay friends with Harry. -_-) and the other Slytherins maybe people will dislike Slytherin a bit less and perhaps with Harry's influence Slytherin won't be quite as mean spirited. (Though I guess I can understand why they act the way they do when all the other houses seem to hate them just because they're there.) I think you've written this really well though. It might get kind of boring if you described scenes that pretty much happen the same as the book in detail but you still occasionaly throw in a comment or thought from Harry and go back into detail when there are differences from the book. _ A very well done job in my oppinion. Don't worry too much about the commas though, I'm not much an expert on those either. -_- It probably would be a good idea to call the Weasleys by their first names unless Harry just can't remember their name. (Which would probably only occur with Percy since Ginny's not likely to be mentioned.) Anyway, I can't wait to see how Harry's first day goes! X3 I hope you update soon! |
RespectStarfish chapter 2 . 7/11/2007 I like this story very much, good job. |
Heala chapter 2 . 7/10/2007 You're not to desriptive, I think that you have found a pretty god balance. But if you must I always say too much is better than too little. Update soon! |
AnnF chapter 1 . 7/10/2007 ?What kind of kit? potions? or an animal? cause I could see Hagrid having a cat in his pocket. |
Zoey24 chapter 2 . 7/10/2007 Another amazing chapter! I never expected that Harry would be sorted into Slytherin, I thought for sure it would be Ravenclaw. But I guess its not so bad neither. I just hope that it won't change the friendship between himself and Fred and George. I wonder if Malfoy remembered Harry from the clothing store? I guess not. I am also still loving the fact that your making Harry so open-minded about the houses,(unlike Ron), and the discussion he had with Ron about categorizing Slytherin as evil. I'm also surprised of the unity that the Slytherins have in their house, I guess it should be expected since no one fom other houses trust a Slytherin. I can't wait for the next chapter! P.S. You should just call the Weasley's by their first name, unless they are all together. |
darkchild chapter 1 . 7/9/2007 Please update as soon as possible, this story sounds very interesting so far_... |
Zoey24 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007 This is an amazing start, plz continue! I LOVE the whole idea of Harry meeting Fred and George. You totally had them in character with each of them trying to pretend that their the other twin, and telling him their the 'Kings of Pranks'. It was also very refreshing and helpful for Harry since he got to learn about the Houses of Hogwarts (I'm also thankful that Fred didn't describe Slytherin as the house with the most criminals or the 'Evil' House, like other authors would since it seems like the Weasleys [or mostly Ron] really seem to hate the Slytherins). Anyway, I'm pleasantly surprised that you had Harry meet Draco. You know, Draco doesn't seem that bad, but I guess that's only because he doesn't know that its the famous Harry Potter and doesn't bother trying to impress him. But I wonder if this interaction could lead to a more -friendlier than the book- relationship? I can't help but notice the comment that Harry thinks he might be in Ravenclaw! Are you really going to put him in Ravenclaw? Is he going to meet up with Hermione? Ron? (Just a thought: if he does meet up with Hermione you could make it so they both end up in Ravenclaw, since Hermione does have the potential.) AH! I'M GOING CRAZY WITH ALL THESE QUESTIONS IN MY HEAD! Only you could stop this by updating as fast as you can! BYE! 'waves' |
Spellcaster Hikaru chapter 1 . 7/3/2007 Hm, interesting idea you have here. I always did like Fred and George a bit more than Ron, whom I'm assuming they will replace as best friend (or friends). Will he still become good friends with Hermione? I bet Harry seemed a lot smarter to Malfoy since he actually knew a bit about houses. He certainly wasn't as annoying as he was in the book for that scene. Well, I can't wait to see how the next chapter goes! X3 I hope you update soon. |