Dobby I know you’re well meaning but you are really making me hate you right now. Everything was going well and you just HAD to ruin it

This story feels so bizarre. Do you honestly think a bunch of 11 year olds would interact like this? 11 year olds are not supposed to be masters of articulation, collectiveness, and maturity.

Especially when Harry immediately calls out Malfoy on being a racist, and all the Slytherins around him just thoughtfully take his point in stride.

And then you even included a disclaimer on every chapter because you got salty that people didn't like your characters? I'm sorry I can't just shut up and hit the back button. Your cast of robots you've written here is so bad that I can't help but want to convey it. Maybe you should learn from the little robots you've written by "thoughtfully thinking about it" whenever criticism comes your way.

It's petrification, not petrifaction.

I thought Creevey wasn't petrified because of his camera.
Finch -Fletchley was the one who looked through Nick. Ignore me if I'm wrong. I haven't read the books in years.

Why does Harry refer to professor Snape as 'the man' in Potions when he already knows his name?

Omg Harry burned them sooooooo bad

Hi
I loved this book it was really interesting it kept drawing me in I didn't want to stop reading it
I wanted to know if there is any chance that you would continue this book or make a sequel or if someone else wants to take over because I think that it ended rather abruptly

You mean Unspeakable, right?

Your conversations end kinda abruptly. I don't know if you were trying to be funny with the Dumbledore reacted in such an ignorant fashion. Dumbledore was many things, ignorant and stupid not.

Creevey saw through the camera, didn't he? Not Nick.

Umm...why would Harry forget about the will when he already spoke to the map at the beginning of 2nd year about it?

I think the key was given to Harry after the first withdrawal. But God! Harry is sooo adorable with wanting to write down the speech! :) I did always wonder why he never asks about his parents' graves though, you know after he finds out how they died and all. He goes to visit in the final book, I somehow found it to have deprived him of expressing his grief, however young he was.

I'm concerned. This story hasn't been updated since the year I was born. That's 11 years ago! Are you OK? Have you given up fanfiction? Why haven't you updated?

FANTASTIC ! I've been looking for a 100K 'Harry meets Twins first' story for ages ( almost two YEARS ! ) .
Just had a quick flick though & it already looks promising .

I like how you made Harry use his Slytherin smarts to not use the car too get to Hogwarts. It will now be Ron who get in trouble on his own. I have seem the same situation in other stories mainly ones where Harry has a twin who is the boy who lived where he and Ron take the car leaving Harry in the Station. Why they did what they did was a stupid idea seeing as there are going to be seen flying a car. The smarts Harry has is what makes him a good Slytherin.