Reviews for Fireworks
SecretCodeLyokan chapter 1 . 6/18
I liked it
lindsay chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
thats was sso sweet i loved it
kim chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
It is short but it is GREAT! I love the idea!
lunacat13 chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
very adorable! I love fireworks!
TAMANTHA104 chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
another wonderful story! just like on the verge of letting go. that is so cute! if only that would happen on the tv show...
NewMrs.Edward Cullen chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
Haileyamandar chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
SO CUTE. Precious story with an adorable concept .

Good writing style, the kind that I like, and the whole time I was reading this fanfiction, I was smiling. Yumi must have had quite an infectious grin X_x

I think you did a swell job with Yumi's character. To me, it seemed just like her. Everybody thinks differently than they act, and I could picture her perfectly throughout the whole story. It was clear, crisp, and definately in character. Yumi has got a soft side, so they've shown in the episodes.

Good job . Definately favorited.

P.S. - For some reason, the line "wanna sparkler?" made me laugh out loud. xD
samuraigurl1213 chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
I didn't happen to think it was too OOC at all. I'm sure there was some degree of it in there, but the cuteness factor of it all alone made up for it.

LeaMarie F. Metallium chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
OMG! That is so freaking cute! I love it! Please keep up the great work, and the cuteness!
PLF94 chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
short yet sweet
lucky-charm930 chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
kool story

im glad yumi has a soft spot

really good story keep wrtitng


ShadyBoyM chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
cute and funny, good job
walnutdemon chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Aw! I loved that!
Bighoggi14 chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Ah! It's so cute!

Oh my god. That was adorable!

And don't worry. Everyone's got a soft spot somewhere, right? Who says Yumi's can't be fireworks?

Love the story. Definitely favorited.


... do they celebrate Fourth of July in France? xD
CherryPika91 chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
That was great!
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