Reviews for The Kiss
CMEREBOYYY chapter 1 . 5/26
Very good, nice work guy.
more chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Who's Ichiyoshi ?
kataragurl27 chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
i like it
petbabe101 chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
That wuz sooooooooooooo romantic I think its sweet and all and im a superrrrrrrr! Taang fan so it rockes!
crazidolphingirl chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
nice work, i would love to know how Katara and Sokka married if you make another story could you mention it?
Natsha123456 chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Ichigo's from tokyo mew mew, but great story.
yaytaangyay12 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
isn't Ichigo a guys name from than that nice job you really described Toph's joyfulness.
Alexandromeda Cullen II chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
That was really sweet! I just love Taangfics. Thanks!

Your devoted readers,

Julia & Emilee
Pink Illusion chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
*gasps* Aw, perfectly sweet ending. You have a flair for fluff, but Toph was a little too sugary, almost a Ty Lee. Otherwise, it was very upbeat and cute. Just work on Toph.
DanceOfTheEntWives chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
love this story! it's really awesome!toph is so ... toph -
Butterfree chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
Well, it was cute

But I think you need to work a bit more on POV telling, you know, explore more on Toph's thoughts. The amount you explained in this fanfiction could be just a third person POV, it makes the story a lot more enjoyable if the reader feels as if the characters are their actual characters in the show

((Sorry, I have a habit of giving way more critism then positive stuff...))

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
almostinsane chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Great story! Thanks for writing this! God bless!
boe chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
MORE DAMNIT(wow i never cuss)
tenneyshoes chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Dang Cute!
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