Reviews for Beginning of a true partnership
Guest chapter 6 . 7/8/2013
I was interested in the first two chapters but then it turned into:
PAIRING
PAIRING
PARING SEX
PARING
Zetsu.
PARING
PARING
SMUT SCENE

It was more laughable then what I had hoped for. Still a good story, though.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/25/2013
Who the hell is Monmora?
Orchid of Shadow chapter 6 . 1/6/2013
please make another one *gets on hands and knees with puppy dog eyes* Pleeeaaasssseeeee
XxRavenblazexX chapter 6 . 5/31/2012
cute story, nice job on hidan too i could todally c him doing all thoughs things!
macaronisofa chapter 6 . 5/29/2012
Brilliant! I LOVED it! Please, please, write more! Great work, keep going! XD
Meagan222haru-chan chapter 6 . 10/15/2009
Aw the end to me is cute X3 3~
2 lazy 2 log on chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
sweet.
Oaid chapter 6 . 12/12/2008
Aww~ I loved this

The ending was cute too :3
black55widow chapter 6 . 1/9/2008
Such a sweet ending.
Lady Deimos chapter 6 . 11/29/2007
I'm gonna glomp you for making such a good story!*glomps* OMJ!(oh my jashin) your so freakin good at writing these stories! I loveish you!
Vampyress-Freak6 chapter 6 . 10/12/2007
that was really cute

i loved it

thank you for the interesting story

lov ~ your friendly neighbourhood vampire
F. W. Bourdillon chapter 6 . 8/3/2007
Are you going to continue this? (looks hopeful)

Well this was great! I loved reading it! XD
anime-A DG chapter 4 . 7/23/2007
I liked it...alot.
Shirox chapter 6 . 7/20/2007
This is the last chapter? O.o Aaww :/ Oh well, nice work:)
lyAlive chapter 2 . 7/14/2007
uh...yea he just met him and just stripped? x.x
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